COMPLETE - Richard III by William Shakespeare - ek

[aradlaw]

Thank you Sandra, Act 5 is PL OK, note to editor - there are 2 versions of the lines to chose from.

Act 3, sc 1
at 0:34 the rest of the line after is missing the stage direction...
PRINCE
I thank you, good my lord;—and thank you all.
[Exeunt MAYOR, &c.]
I thought my mother and my brother York
Would long ere this have met us on the way:
Fie, what a slug is Hastings, that he comes not
To tell us whether they will come or no!

again, at 0:48 the rest of the line is missing after the stage direction...
RINCE
Good lords, make all the speedy haste you may.
[Exeunt CARDINAL and HASTINGS.]
Say, uncle Gloster, if our brother come,
Where shall we sojourn till our coronation?

[RuthieG]

Oh. That is my fault then. I didn't notice these at all.

[Sandra7]

Hello again,
sorry about that, here's the corrected version of act three scene one:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/richardiii_edward_3.mp3
Duration: 3:10
Size: 2.91 MB

All the best,
Sandra.

[DSayers]

Here's Rivers lines for 1.3, 2.1, 2.2, 3.3 and 5.3:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/richardiii_rivers.mp3

Somebody' gonna be busy editing this weekend, I can just tell ...

-denny

[gloriana]

Thanks so much to Sandra, Ruth, and Denny! Most appreciated. Yes, I will definitely be doing some editing this weekend...

[gloriana]

Here's Act 2:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/richardiii_2_shakespeare.mp3
(23:17)

This one was already edited; just needed to drop in Rivers's lines. If someone could take a listen and let me know how it sounds, I'd appreciate it. I will listen today as well.

[Sandra7]

Act two's sounding pretty good, very slick!

All the best,
Sandra.

[Dave in the Fax]

Since Gloriana is starting to put it all together, here are corrected versions of Richard's 1.1 and 1.3:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/richardiii_richard_1_scene1revised.mp3

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/richardiii_richard_1_scene3revised.mp3

[aradlaw]

denny ; all acts are PL OK, but there is one Ghost line missing in 5.3

The Ghost of Rivers should be saying this with his follow spirits...

[The Ghosts of RIVERS, GREY, and VAUGHAN rise.]
GHOST OF RIVERS
[To KING RICHARD.] Let me sit heavy in thy soul to-morrow,
Rivers that died at Pomfret! despair and die!

GHOST OF GREY
[To KING RICHARD.] Think upon Grey, and let thy soul despair!

GHOST OF VAUGHAN
[To KING RICHARD.] Think upon Vaughan, and, with guilty fear,
Let fall thy lance: despair and die!—

ALL THREE
[To RICHMOND.] Awake, and think our wrongs in Richard's bosom
Will conquer him!—awake, and win the day!

Elizabeth, do you want the whole ghost chorus here?

[DSayers]

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[DSayers]

denny ; all acts are PL OK, but there is one Ghost line missing in 5.3

ALL THREE
[To RICHMOND.] Awake, and think our wrongs in Richard's bosom
Will conquer him!—awake, and win the day!

Elizabeth, do you want the whole ghost chorus here?[/quote]

I've downloaded Grey's and Vaughn's lines from Act 5 and will use them as tracks to gauge the timing of my own. Then I'll send just my track. I suppose that's how to go about it, right?

-denny

[gloriana]

That sounds good to me, Denny - thanks!

And thanks to Dave for the corrected Act 1 files! That will indeed help as I am editing this weekend.

[aradlaw]

Thank you Sandra and Dave, that makes all your sections PL OK

[DSayers]

Here is Rivers' line as part of the Act 5 ghost chorus.

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/richardiii_5_riverschorus.mp3

I've timed my reading with Grey's, which is shorter than Vaughn's. I suggest that Vaughn's have little bits edited out so that it is as short. Or else, I guess, you can add add silence to Rivers and Grey so that they match the longer Vaughn.

Editing multi-voices is a mystery to me!

-denny

[aradlaw]

Many thanks denny, it is tricky, but works kinda like you've suggested.