COMPLETE: [RELIGION] The Book of Ezekiel (YLT) - lm

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Post by nebgreen »

Here's the slightly edited Section 2:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/lm/ezekiel_02_ylt.mp3

Now, I did not change the "rightly have ye said" part because I did not think it represented that much of a problem in the grand scheme of it, but I DID add those four words at 11:03 that, for some odd reason, got left out of the recording (I think it was a glitch in my WavePad program).

Thank you, Lomond, for your very good observation!


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Post by lomond »

LeonMire wrote:By the way, Lomond, I didn't mean anything against you by what I said above. Your attention to details like that is definitely appreciated, especially since it's the Bible. Just be aware that on most projects, most people are only looking for technical errors, like forgetting to edit out a re-take, or having the volume too low.. things like that.
Greetings -

Thanks for the feedback. I think you will find me working on primarily religious projects as that is where my interests are.

But, then again, there's science fiction...

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Greetings -

Listened to the revised Section 2 and it sounds ready to go as far as I am concerned.

Listened to Section 3:

No background noises, no inordinate delays or pauses, consistent audio level.

Only one thing for you to check:

Time: 5:30 Chapter 14 Verse 7

for every one of the house of Israel, and of the sojourners who doth sojourn in Israel, who is SEPARATED from after Me...

Read as "separating"

That's it. Have you lost count of how many times you have read, "an affirmation of the Lord Jehovah"? :lol:

On to Section 4.

Lomond
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Post by nebgreen »

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D
Ezekiel is DONE, FINISHED, COMPLETED, OUTTA-THE-WAY!!!!!!!!!

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/lm/ezekiel_08_ylt.mp3

30:26, 27.8 MB

Thank you, Leon, for your gracious assistance, as always, and to you, Lomond, for taking on the harrowing task of PL'ing my work!!!

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Post by nebgreen »

Hi Lomond,

I've decided to mark Section 3 as OK on the MW. The one mistake you found was, in my humble opinion, not significant enough to change and then have to reload the entire file. Thank you again, nevertheless, for your great ear!!!


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lomond wrote:Have you lost count of how many times you have read, "an affirmation of the Lord Jehovah"? :lol:
:lol: :lol: Yeah! But, how powerful a statement it is!!!!


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Greetings -

Just a few notes for section four of Ezekiel:

Time: 5:33 Chapter 20 Verse 19

I am Jehovah your God, in My statutes walk, And My judgments observe, AND do them.

Read as observe, "to" do them

Time: 15:24 Chapter 21 Verse 31

With fire of My wrath I blow against thee, AND HAVE given thee...

Reading has "and I have given thee...

Time: 25:30 Chapter 23 Verse 37

For they have committed adultery, and blood is IN their hands,...

Read as "blood is ON their hands,..."

That's it for this section. No technical or timing difficulties noted. On to the next section.

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Hi lomond,

I will mark Section 4 as good. Again, I didn't find that the discrepancies were too major. Thanks again.


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Greetings -

Here are some notes on this section:

Time: 6:22 Chapter 26 Verse 19

For thus said the Lord Jehovah: In my making thee a city WASTED, Like cities that have not been inhabited, In bringing up against thee the deep, The covered thee have the great waters.

Reading has "washed" instead of "wasted".

Time: 13:56 Chapter 28 Verse 14

Thou [art] an anointed cherub who is covering, And I have set thee in the holy mount, God thou hast BEEN. In the midst of stones of fire thou hast walked up and down.

Reading has "seen" instead of "been".

That's it for this section. Do you get the impression that God was just a bit upset with these folks?

On to Section 6.

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Greetings -

There are no notes for Section 6. A clean reading. Ready to go. No technical or audio problems.

On to Section 7.

Lomond
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lomond wrote:Do you get the impression that God was just a bit upset with these folks?
NOOOO!!!! I don't think He was upset with them in the LEAST!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: NOOOO!!!!!!


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Post by nebgreen »

Here is the fixed version of Section 5:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/lm/ezekiel_05_ylt.mp3

New runtime: 23:49
File size: 21.7 MB

Thank you for your great ear!

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Greetings -

Just a couple of notes for Section 7:

Time: 13:23 Chapter 39 Verse 15

And those passing by have passed through the land, and seen a bone of man, and one hath constructed near it a sign till those BURYING HAVE buried it in the valley of the multitude of Gog.

Reading has an extra "it"...those burying IT have buried it in the valley...

Time 20:21 Chapter 40 Verse 34

And its arches [are] toward the outer COURT, and palm-trees [are] toward its posts, on this side and on that side, and eight steps [are] its ascent.

Reading has "gate" instead of "court".

I found myself trying to do the conversions of reeds into feet as I read. Now, let's see...a reed is six cubits long and a sanctuary cubit is 22 inches (the most commonly accepted length) which means that...

On to the last section.

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Greetings -

A question of pronunciation and a few omitted words for you this time. Just two notes:

Time: 00:58 Chapter 43 Verse 3

A question on the pronunciation of "Chebar". In earlier chapters, it was pronounced CHEE-bar and, in this chapter, KEE-bar. I know...picky, picky, picky.

Time: 10:08 Chapter 44 Verse 28

And it hath been to them for an inheritance: I [AM] THEIR INHERITANCE: and a possession ye do not give to them in Israel; I [am] their possession.

Reading omitted "I [am] their inheritance".

Well, that's its for Ezekiel. What would you like PL'ed next?

Lomond
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Post by nebgreen »

Here's the fixed file for Section 7:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/lm/ezekiel_07_ylt.mp3

Runtime: 31:01
File Size: 28.4 MB (both same as original file)


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