COMPLETE:The Passionate Pilgrim - William Shakespeare -PO/kh

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 5th, 2007, 3:55 pm

I've added that as the summary. If you'd like to make any changes to it you can do so up until I start cataloguing.

OK, proof listening done, here are the notes. All of these are very minor. Let me know if you are ok with some of them as is or if you would like to fix.

1 - Although I know my years be past the best - read: that my years
I smiling credit her false-speaking tongue - read: her with false-speaking tongue

2 - OK

3 - Poem OK, Said end of poem 1 at the end, if you'd like I can either cut that out or swap it for the end from another.

4 - OK

5 - O never faith could hold, if not to beauty vow'd: - read: could hold it

6 - OK
7 - OK
8 - OK
9 - OK
10 - OK
11 - OK

12 - Youth like summer morn, Youth like summer brave - added "a" before summer in both lines.

13 - A flower that dies when first it gins to bud; - read: it first gins to bud

14 - OK

15 - shine sun to succour flowers! - read: sun shine to succour flowers

Caliban · Post by **Caliban** » September 5th, 2007, 4:12 pm

Kristin,

I have to wait for quiet here. But will get to work on these tonight - the corrections will be posted by tomorrow morning. I just completely missed everything but the tail of 3!! - I can't/don't hear my mistakes! Thanks for the (4th?) Audit.

Cal

Caliban · Post by **Caliban** » September 5th, 2007, 10:59 pm

Kristin,

Apparently they all have the same links but these files have all been replaced:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_01_shakespeare.mp3
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_03_shakespeare.mp3
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_05_shakespeare.mp3
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_12_shakespeare.mp3
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_13_shakespeare.mp3
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_15_shakespeare.mp3

I audited them but I'm not swearing to anything - I audited the last 4 batches as well supposedly. Thank you for your help! I learned a LOT on this project!

Cal

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 6th, 2007, 3:50 am

Yes, now that we're in sept. the links will remain the same till the end of the month, no matter how many times you replace the file.

That is why it's good to have 2 sets of ears listen to the files. I'm not promising I'll catch everything but I've tried to be very thorough and attentive.

I'll get these proof listened later today.

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 6th, 2007, 8:53 pm

I'm doing it now... sorry, got a bit sidetracked today.

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 6th, 2007, 9:14 pm

All OK, except 15 which still has sun shine instead of shine sun.

Caliban · Post by **Caliban** » September 7th, 2007, 4:40 am

Kristin,

I seem to suffer from some mild variant of slydexia. When I read your notes I thought you were referring to a weak emphasis on the phrase.

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/200709/passionatepilgrim_15_shakespeare.mp3

I didn't audit this! Its bloody pointless!! You'll just have to settle for crossed fingers ...

Cal

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 7th, 2007, 11:57 am

Crossed fingers must work... 15 is OK!

I've started cataloguing.

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 7th, 2007, 4:28 pm

Yay, all done.

Here is the catalogue page: http://www.archive.org/details/passionate_pilgrim_cal_librivox

Please, take a look and make sure everything looks right to you.

Caliban · Post by **Caliban** » September 7th, 2007, 8:59 pm

Kristin,

Please allow me to offer my most heartfelt thanks for your help with this project. Truly, I couldn't have done this without you!

Cal

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 7th, 2007, 9:07 pm

You're most welcome. I really enjoyed your reading of these poems and I hope you find another poetry project in the future.

kristin · Post by **kristin** » September 8th, 2007, 7:50 pm

Now if only I had given the link to the catalogue page instead of the link to archive.

Here's the correct link: http://librivox.org/the-passionate-pilgrim-by-william-shakespeare/