All corrections complete and perfect! There is just a touch more than one second of silence at the start; I don't know how specific the .5 to 1 second rule is. I'll leave this up to you and Todd.jennlea wrote: ↑November 29th, 2022, 8:40 pmThank you so much, Wendy! I've gone ahead and corrected all the spots you mentioned:WendyKatzHiller wrote: ↑November 21st, 2022, 1:15 pm
Excellent job! I really like the pace and the characterizations.
My few notes are all unimportant; nothing changes the meaning of the lines. It's totally up to you if you want to bother correcting them or not.
9:34 Added word "Except the man I was [going] to marry"
14:33 Flipped words "Here am/I"
16:20 Missing word "as he flew out the [hall] door"
20:50 Flipped words "I don't care how/much we"
38:58 Missing word "Don't you think [so]"
Other than that, PL OK.
Wendy
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_03_various_128kb.mp3
60:34
Thanks,
Wendy