yes I agree, this flow is much smoother than the previous section I think I would have like Brahms in his lifetime.louishehman wrote: ↑June 21st, 2022, 6:24 pmHere is chapter 18 on Brahms. I took note of the suggestions for pauses between paragraphs, so hopefully the timing on this chapter should move more smoothly. However, please do let me know what edits may need to be made.
Only a few small edits this time:
> at 24:01: "when the young musician traveled to Hanover and Leipsic" – you say "from Hanover to Leipsic"
> at 28:17: missed sentence: "That was in 1861."
> from 36:10 to 36:12: between "attention shown him" and "every evening" - pause a bit too long
> from 36:52 to 36:55: between "in Hamburg" and "end of chapter 18" - pause a bit too long
well this is indeed good news thank you, Louis ! Looking forward to Liszt.I have also noted the PL edits from the previous post. I should be able to fix the Chopin chapter in the next few days. Thanks for your very detailed feedback!
On to Liszt next. I will have this final chapter in by the Thursday deadline!
Sonia