COMPLETE: Love's Coming-of-Age: A Series of Papers on the Relations of the Sexes by Edward Carpenter -jo

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Scarbo
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Thank you for your sections! There's just one quick thing to take care of for 5 and then you'll be all set: at 23:53, after "we must give that thing some degree of liberty," could you include the line "even though liberty bring with it risk?"

PLing for 6 and 7 to follow later today!
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Section 6 sounds great, thanks again! The only note I have is that at 20:42, "there are always plentiful indications," you say "there are already plentiful indications."

On to section 7!
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Thanks again for 7, which is also nicely done! I just have some notes about a few repeats here and there:

- At 2:07, could you edit out the "that have been obtained and been recognized" that occurs before "that have obtained and been recognized"?
- At 3:06, there's a repeat of "as among the Nagas of Bengal."
- At 3:58, there's a repeat of "that, broadly speaking."
- At 7:19, you say "is still ever asserting itself" before correcting it to "is still ever asserting herself."
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Post by Arden »

Hey Scarbo, sorry about the delay on these edits. Thanks for all your good work.


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_05_carpenter_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_06_carpenter_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_07_carpenter_128kb.mp3
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No one wants sec. 3 (Woman: the Serf)?!? If I know Carpenter, he'll come out guns ablazing on this topic (for his time, anyway). I'll take it.

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Post by Scarbo »

All sections PL OK! Thank you! And no worries about the delay, I know that life outside LV can be hectic sometimes. :)
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Post by Scarbo »

vviera wrote: ↑November 23rd, 2021, 5:43 pm No one wants sec. 3 (Woman: the Serf)?!? If I know Carpenter, he'll come out guns ablazing on this topic (for his time, anyway). I'll take it.

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I realized my recording is the last one for completion because it had to be reassigned. I've been finishing a couple of other things and will begin on this today.

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No rush! :)
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Sec. 3, 25:01
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_03_carpenter_128kb.mp3
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Post by Scarbo »

Thank you for section 3! It's PL OK.

And that makes this project ready for cataloging!
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Post by knotyouraveragejo »

Congratulations! This book is now in the LibriVox catalog and available for listeners to download. Please check the catalog page and let me know if any changes are needed:

https://librivox.org/loves-coming-of-age-by-edward-carpenter/
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Post by Scarbo »

Everything looks good! Thank you, Jo, and thank you, readers! :clap:
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