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Lorry
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by Lorry » November 27th, 2022, 5:32 am
BetsyWalker wrote: ↑ November 25th, 2022, 1:37 pm
Hi Lori - I've PLed both sections 3 & 4. They both pass the Checker specs. I do have one comment for you on each section:
**In section 3 at 0:22 “Won’t” dropped from “Won’t you take a spoon?” makes it sound less like a question.
**In section 4 at 7:24 = The correction you made of “…play us a tune, if you can play ever a good one…” needs trimming. Some of what you intended to correct is still there.
Aside from those two items, great reading!
Betsy
Hi Betsy,
These two are corrected.
Thanks,
Lori
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by Lorry » November 28th, 2022, 1:22 pm
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by BetsyWalker » November 28th, 2022, 5:02 pm
Section 5 is fine - good job, Lori! - Betsy
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by Lorry » November 28th, 2022, 9:58 pm
Hi Betsy,
Thanks! You're quick. Makes me want to stay up late and do another section!
Take care,
Lori
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by BetsyWalker » November 29th, 2022, 11:26 am
Ha Ha Lori!! I try to stay on top of things. I'm PLing for a few books, so I try not to get them confused or left behind. It's FUN!!
- Betsy
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by Lorry » November 29th, 2022, 4:55 pm
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by BetsyWalker » November 29th, 2022, 8:12 pm
Section 6 well read, Lori. I have just one correction. At 3:46 the words “when she was shown into the room” are missing. Otherwise this is fine!
- Betsy
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by Lorry » December 24th, 2022, 6:37 am
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by BetsyWalker » December 24th, 2022, 9:08 am
Lorry - section 7 is perfect! I'll PL section 8 later today - Betsy
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by BetsyWalker » December 24th, 2022, 2:51 pm
And, Section 8 is also perfect. Brava!!
- Betsy
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by Lorry » December 24th, 2022, 2:53 pm
Hi Betsy,
Wow, you're fast!!! Thank you so much. We did it!
Best wishes,
Lori
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by knotyouraveragejo » December 24th, 2022, 6:57 pm
Still need you to write a summary, Lori, before I can catalog the project.
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