[COMPLETE] Witchcraft of New England Explained by Modern Spiritualism by Allen Putnam - dc
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Veronica,
I realize that the PL level for this project is Standard, so if you feel you don't want to make these corrections for section 0, that's okay. I only point them out because they seem important for meaning. Please let me know if I should continue in the same way--I don't mean to be too picky!
--at 17:06 "more relatively" change to "move relatively aloof..."
--at 20:47 "divisive" change to "decisive response to..."
--at 22:36 "Salem" to "Samuel G. Drake"
--at 23:38 "advertising" to "advising each one..."
--at 26:36 "accentuated" to "actuated physical forms..."
Thanks,
Lora
I realize that the PL level for this project is Standard, so if you feel you don't want to make these corrections for section 0, that's okay. I only point them out because they seem important for meaning. Please let me know if I should continue in the same way--I don't mean to be too picky!
--at 17:06 "more relatively" change to "move relatively aloof..."
--at 20:47 "divisive" change to "decisive response to..."
--at 22:36 "Salem" to "Samuel G. Drake"
--at 23:38 "advertising" to "advising each one..."
--at 26:36 "accentuated" to "actuated physical forms..."
Thanks,
Lora
Thanks, Lora! Please continue PLing this way, I appreciate it. If it changes the meaning of the text I definitely want to change it.ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑October 25th, 2021, 11:30 am Veronica,
I realize that the PL level for this project is Standard, so if you feel you don't want to make these corrections for section 0, that's okay. I only point them out because they seem important for meaning. Please let me know if I should continue in the same way--I don't mean to be too picky!
--at 17:06 "more relatively" change to "move relatively aloof..."
--at 20:47 "divisive" change to "decisive response to..."
--at 22:36 "Salem" to "Samuel G. Drake"
--at 23:38 "advertising" to "advising each one..."
--at 26:36 "accentuated" to "actuated physical forms..."
Thanks,
Lora
I'll edit this later tonight and reupload it.
I'm slowly working on the next chapter, but it's a long one. Hopefully, I'll be done tonight or tomorrow!
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I've made the edits on section 00!
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/witchcraftofnewengland_00_putnam_128kb.mp3
27:35
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/witchcraftofnewengland_00_putnam_128kb.mp3
27:35
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The edits are very smooth--thanks. L.
Here's section 2. It felt like it took forever to record!
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/witchcraftofnewengland_02_putnam_128kb.mp3
42:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/witchcraftofnewengland_02_putnam_128kb.mp3
42:33
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Hi Veronica,
I've marked section #2 as PL Okay, but please check at 1:42, where "intimidated" should be "intimated" in "Mather intimated willingness..." and at 19:32, where "consciously external" should be "conscious externally..."
Thanks,
Lora
I've marked section #2 as PL Okay, but please check at 1:42, where "intimidated" should be "intimated" in "Mather intimated willingness..." and at 19:32, where "consciously external" should be "conscious externally..."
Thanks,
Lora
I had to fix it!ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑November 1st, 2021, 4:11 pm Hi Veronica,
I've marked section #2 as PL Okay, but please check at 1:42, where "intimidated" should be "intimated" in "Mather intimated willingness..." and at 19:32, where "consciously external" should be "conscious externally..."
Thanks,
Lora
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/witchcraftofnewengland_02_putnam_128kb.mp3
42:31
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Just wanted to update you guys! My son cracked the screen on my laptop and I’m waiting for it to be repaired and sent back to me. Hopefully next week. So, I haven’t been able to record. Can’t wait to get back to it.
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Hi Veronica,
Thanks for the fix and good luck with the computer!
Lora
Thanks for the fix and good luck with the computer!
Lora
Sorry I haven't updated in a while. My computer is fixed and I should be able to get back to recording after the holidays!
Currently volunteering for my senior project. Expecting to graduate with a BS in Information and Library Science, Dec. '21!
I apologize that it's been another month with no update. There's been a lot going on between graduating and the holidays. Now, right before the next semester begins I spontaneously decided to pursue a graduate certificate. So, I think I'm going to need to put this project on hold, unfortunately. If anyone wants to take it over, I'm fine with that as well. I just don't currently have the time.
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Thanks for the update, Veronica. For now, I'll take it off my DPL list. Best wishes on your graduate work--sounds exciting!
Lora
Lora