Kitty wrote: ↑September 2nd, 2021, 11:10 am
jakemalizia wrote: ↑September 2nd, 2021, 10:19 amCome on Rigby, tell us what you saw! Unless he has been compromised somehow in that house, and he's now part of the conspiracy?
no I definitely don't think that ! Not Rigby !
I have a hunch who the Padini is too... the man Jack saw through the window of the music room?
considering what the chapter title for section 9 is, you'll know we were both right. And we'll get to meet the mysterious housekeeper again. Chapter 9 is fresh from the press.
Thank you for the quick PL
There is no hurry, as always.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/yellowface_09_white_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 13:07 min.
We are now 2 hours into the story.
Sonia
Am I interpreting this correctly - he's saying Padini played a Chopin fantasie which was exactly the same as what Anstruther played... but he says what Anstruther played was a Choping nocturne
....then later it was mentioned that Padini had played a Rhapsody in F?
it's not important anyway, I think. White definitely knows how to build suspense, we're 9 chapters in and I feel like there are more mysteries now than at the start, and none of them solved. It's great stuff!
Nicely done. I liked your "stifled cry" at the end
also, I forgot to mention last time your "fake Cockney" was fun - he got clocked so easily with that Turkish cigarette.
All PL OK!
I didn't know if it was worth mentioning but, the way you're saying "Albert Hall" is perfectly understandable what you're referring to, I don't think you need to change it - but the "Al" in
Albert, should rhyme more with "shall/gal" than "ball/call". It's so minor, and probably doesn't come up again anyway