COMPLETE The Evacuation of England: The Twist in the Jet Stream by L.P.Gratacap - icequeen
Okay, my interest is no longer in piqued status. This was pl okay now for my comments.
Yes, this section was filled with information that was slow in the telling of. lol
I did not mark this as pl okay as the end has me puzzled a bit. "end of chapter 2 part 1". I did notice in the mw that this is part 1, shouldn't part 2 follow?
I did not notice a "part 2" in the mw.
If this can be explained will mark it as pl okay.
April
Judi,
Above is what I had posted. 1 of 2 reasons why you may not have seen it. Perhaps I should have waited a moment more to submit or you needed to refresh your page to see it? Could have also been the fact that we were mere moments of each other so we just should have been more patient and given it a moment to catch up?
Yes, this section was filled with information that was slow in the telling of. lol
I did not mark this as pl okay as the end has me puzzled a bit. "end of chapter 2 part 1". I did notice in the mw that this is part 1, shouldn't part 2 follow?
I did not notice a "part 2" in the mw.
If this can be explained will mark it as pl okay.
April
Judi,
Above is what I had posted. 1 of 2 reasons why you may not have seen it. Perhaps I should have waited a moment more to submit or you needed to refresh your page to see it? Could have also been the fact that we were mere moments of each other so we just should have been more patient and given it a moment to catch up?
Not sure if you think I should continue with this. After The Lecture, it does pick up a bit, but not a whole lot.
LMK if you think we should see this through.
I did not update the MW to reflect all the divisions into parts. I shall do that once I know we are going to continue.
I am working editing on Pt 2 of The Lecture.
J
LMK if you think we should see this through.
I did not update the MW to reflect all the divisions into parts. I shall do that once I know we are going to continue.
I am working editing on Pt 2 of The Lecture.
J
Judi Mason
Judi,
The choice to continue is yours. This is a book with not a lot of chapters & you did mention how it seems to improve in the upcoming chapters.
I am not planning on going anywhere. If you decide to stick with this, I will too.
April
The choice to continue is yours. This is a book with not a lot of chapters & you did mention how it seems to improve in the upcoming chapters.
I am not planning on going anywhere. If you decide to stick with this, I will too.
April
Yes, that is fine! If you need to add more sections, that is fine as well!
Ann
Audio, video, disco!
Audio, video, disco!
Hello Judi,
The lecture part 1 is now marked as pl okay. I understand just why you stated at the end that it was the end of chapter 2, part 1. ( that is section 3 in the mw)
The lecture part 2, (section 4 in the mw) has one edit for you to fix. It is a word that is not as the text reads. It is located @ 7:46 in the audio file. I hear " the Engler astronomer", should be "the English astronomer". Please do record that line again than repost.
You do read well with the larger words & affecting the male voice as well.
April
The lecture part 1 is now marked as pl okay. I understand just why you stated at the end that it was the end of chapter 2, part 1. ( that is section 3 in the mw)
The lecture part 2, (section 4 in the mw) has one edit for you to fix. It is a word that is not as the text reads. It is located @ 7:46 in the audio file. I hear " the Engler astronomer", should be "the English astronomer". Please do record that line again than repost.
You do read well with the larger words & affecting the male voice as well.
April