SOLO Last Call For Sector 9G by Leigh Brackett - pc
Section 1 PL notes
7:31 Text: storehouse Said: warehouse
8:16 Text: Liquor, they said. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks. Liquor, they said, and the accident.
Said: Liquor, they said, and the accident. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks.
12:14 Text: About time. About time, damn you, Hawtree, that you remembered me. About time omitted.
7:31 Text: storehouse Said: warehouse
8:16 Text: Liquor, they said. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks. Liquor, they said, and the accident.
Said: Liquor, they said, and the accident. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks.
12:14 Text: About time. About time, damn you, Hawtree, that you remembered me. About time omitted.
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On it! Thanks for the quick turn-around time!sjmarky wrote: ↑July 12th, 2021, 2:28 pm Section 1 PL notes
7:31 Text: storehouse Said: warehouse
8:16 Text: Liquor, they said. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks. Liquor, they said, and the accident.
Said: Liquor, they said, and the accident. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks.
12:14 Text: About time. About time, damn you, Hawtree, that you remembered me. About time omitted.
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All taken care of and ready for spot-check!sjmarky wrote: ↑July 12th, 2021, 2:28 pm Section 1 PL notes
7:31 Text: storehouse Said: warehouse
8:16 Text: Liquor, they said. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks. Liquor, they said, and the accident.
Said: Liquor, they said, and the accident. No, not liquor, the hell with them. I could always carry my drinks.
12:14 Text: About time. About time, damn you, Hawtree, that you remembered me. About time omitted.
Pl Ok all the way Nice, clean edits.
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Thank you! There's an edit in this one too, hopefully it's just as clean.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lastcallforsectorg_02_brackett_128kb.mp3
Section II clocking in at 18:08.
Section 2 PL notes
There are 3 minor mis-reads, which really don't affect the meaning, so up to you if you want to edit:
4:29 They were always hard, always making a liar out of that pliant, generous mouth. Second always omitted.
8:51 "God, no. Not nearly." Said Oh, God...
16:23 "Well," he said. "Well, if that's the way you feel about it." Second well omitted.
There are 3 minor mis-reads, which really don't affect the meaning, so up to you if you want to edit:
4:29 They were always hard, always making a liar out of that pliant, generous mouth. Second always omitted.
8:51 "God, no. Not nearly." Said Oh, God...
16:23 "Well," he said. "Well, if that's the way you feel about it." Second well omitted.
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Thanks for catching those! All three should be taken care of now.sjmarky wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2021, 10:06 am Section 2 PL notes
There are 3 minor mis-reads, which really don't affect the meaning, so up to you if you want to edit:
4:29 They were always hard, always making a liar out of that pliant, generous mouth. Second always omitted.
8:51 "God, no. Not nearly." Said Oh, God...
16:23 "Well," he said. "Well, if that's the way you feel about it." Second well omitted.
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Section III now ready for PL (Time: 14:37):
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lastcallforsectorg_03_brackett_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
-EVK
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lastcallforsectorg_03_brackett_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
-EVK
Sorry for the late response. Somehow I missed the notice.
Section III PL notes:
11:06 Text Not too believable Heard, No, too believable
12:23 Text Her face turned away Heard Her face turned down
12:29 Text "Do you think—could you give me—" Heard "Do you—could you give me—"
12:47 Text The stairwalk slid them gently Heard The sidewalk
13:30 Text "Get into that cab." Heard "Get into the cab."
13:32 Text The young woman, also smiling Heard The woman, also smiling
The note at 11:06 is the only one that changes the meaning, the rest are up to you.
Section III PL notes:
11:06 Text Not too believable Heard, No, too believable
12:23 Text Her face turned away Heard Her face turned down
12:29 Text "Do you think—could you give me—" Heard "Do you—could you give me—"
12:47 Text The stairwalk slid them gently Heard The sidewalk
13:30 Text "Get into that cab." Heard "Get into the cab."
13:32 Text The young woman, also smiling Heard The woman, also smiling
The note at 11:06 is the only one that changes the meaning, the rest are up to you.
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It may have been something I did. Besides, I'm not even sure where last week went. All I know is that it's not under the sofa.
I hit all of them-- hopefully the edits are smooth enough. Thanks again!
Section III now PL OK.
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Running a little behind on the next chapter.... just wanted to let you know. I hope to have something up over the weekend.
No need to explain. I’m here to support you, not you to entertain me.
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Section IV (finally) ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lastcallforsectorg_04_brackett_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:30
Thanks!
-EVK
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lastcallforsectorg_04_brackett_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:30
Thanks!
-EVK