[COMPLETE] The Age of the Puritans Volume 1 - kaz
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Section 11 Spot Checks
8:24 reminde them of the mercie received between these two places, You left out the word “two”. Kind of picky, your call.
45:25 O that men would prayse the Lord for his goodnesse, & for his wonderfull works to the children of men. You said “for”. Your call.
54:46 Great parts are like great Ordnance: You added the word “like” at the beginning of this sentence.
55:20 and their large parts to enlarge their condemnation there. You said “here”.
Section 3 Spot Checks
22:35 Now I would have you declare something unto me concerning the subject of this writing, and of the matter itself which is written ? You made the correction noted, but in the re-reading you left you the word something.
Section 7 Spot Checks
7:45 To seek yourself in this world is to be lost ; and to be humble is to be exalted.
8:24 reminde them of the mercie received between these two places, You left out the word “two”. Kind of picky, your call.
45:25 O that men would prayse the Lord for his goodnesse, & for his wonderfull works to the children of men. You said “for”. Your call.
54:46 Great parts are like great Ordnance: You added the word “like” at the beginning of this sentence.
55:20 and their large parts to enlarge their condemnation there. You said “here”.
Section 3 Spot Checks
22:35 Now I would have you declare something unto me concerning the subject of this writing, and of the matter itself which is written ? You made the correction noted, but in the re-reading you left you the word something.
Section 7 Spot Checks
7:45 To seek yourself in this world is to be lost ; and to be humble is to be exalted.
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Outstanding Sections 3, 7, and 11 are all now PLOKInTheDesert wrote: ↑July 14th, 2021, 7:05 am Section 11 Spot Checks
Section 3 Spot Checks
Section 7 Spot Checks
Wayne
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Not good!
Section 5 Spot checks
7:36 and there is no... and regenerated Repeat
8:55 ye haue ouercome that wicked one. You said evil.
13:19 know ye that he which worketh righteousnes is borne of him You said ye know. That does give a different meaning to the sentence. Original is an injunction for them to know, and the one read is more a statement of fact. (As I see it.)
13:31 Forgot to say “Church” at the beginning of the Chapter
20:21 Yup, you said “Chapter 5 instead of Chapter 4.
27:07 This is that Iesus Christ You forgot Christ
27:57 and the water Forgot and Your call.
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Good job on the corrections you made, but there are a couple things to look at.
At 8:55, you didn't change "wicked" to "evil". Was that one you missed, or just decided not to change it?
At 27:05, just before the 27:07 correction, you need to delete This is that Jesus Chir
It remains interesting.
Wayne
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Hope you don't have to listen all the way through these to do the spot checks!Kalamareader wrote: ↑July 15th, 2021, 4:06 pmGood job on the corrections you made, but there are a couple things to look at.
At 8:55, you didn't change "wicked" to "evil". Was that one you missed, or just decided not to change it?
At 27:05, just before the 27:07 correction, you need to delete This is that Jesus Chir
It remains interesting.
Wayne
At 8:55, I initially said 'evil' but you pointed out that the text says 'wicked' so I changed it to that.
I have uploaded a version without the mistake at 27:05. Good catch.
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Sorry, I just had a brain burp, dyslexic moment with the wicked/evil thing.InTheDesert wrote: ↑July 15th, 2021, 7:03 pmHope you don't have to listen all the way through these to do the spot checks!Kalamareader wrote: ↑July 15th, 2021, 4:06 pmGood job on the corrections you made, but there are a couple things to look at.
At 8:55, you didn't change "wicked" to "evil". Was that one you missed, or just decided not to change it?
At 27:05, just before the 27:07 correction, you need to delete This is that Jesus Chir
It remains interesting.
Wayne
At 8:55, I initially said 'evil' but you pointed out that the text says 'wicked' so I changed it to that.
I have uploaded a version without the mistake at 27:05. Good catch.
Section 5 is now PLOK
Wayne
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Section 8 is up.
Would it be ok (Wayne/Michael) if I add one more short section while I'm at it?
https://quod.lib.umich.edu/e/eebo/B02133.0001.001?rgn=main;view=fulltext
Would it be ok (Wayne/Michael) if I add one more short section while I'm at it?
https://quod.lib.umich.edu/e/eebo/B02133.0001.001?rgn=main;view=fulltext
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In that case, apologies, I've got work for you: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Charnock
Thanks!
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Wayne, if you'd rather not PL this since it's an addition to the brief, feel free to tell me and I'll bump it into the next volume.
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No, that's fine with me. Just more interesting stuff to listen to.InTheDesert wrote: ↑July 17th, 2021, 7:30 am Wayne, if you'd rather not PL this since it's an addition to the brief, feel free to tell me and I'll bump it into the next volume.
Wayne
Wayne
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Added.InTheDesert wrote: ↑July 17th, 2021, 5:03 am In that case, apologies, I've got work for you: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Charnock
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So I was having a great time recording (the former) section 12 but I realized that it's definitely 3 sections given the limit of 74 minutes so I'll make it itw own project at some point. I've swapped it out for some casuistry from John Owen.
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Section 5 is totally PLOK
The first "Saying", "ONE would scarce imagin such an inward nest of wickedness as is in a natural man; but God hath af∣firmed it: and if the sinner should deny it, his own heart would give him the lye.", reminded me of something else I have read: "For the natural man is an enemy to God, and has been from the fall of Adam, and will be, forever and ever, unless he yields to the enticings of the Holy Spirit, and putteth off the natural man and becometh a saint through the atonement of Christ the Lord, and becometh as a child, submissive, meek, humble, patient, full of love, willing to submit to all things which the Lord seeth fit to inflict upon him, even as a child doth submit to his father."
Wayne
The first "Saying", "ONE would scarce imagin such an inward nest of wickedness as is in a natural man; but God hath af∣firmed it: and if the sinner should deny it, his own heart would give him the lye.", reminded me of something else I have read: "For the natural man is an enemy to God, and has been from the fall of Adam, and will be, forever and ever, unless he yields to the enticings of the Holy Spirit, and putteth off the natural man and becometh a saint through the atonement of Christ the Lord, and becometh as a child, submissive, meek, humble, patient, full of love, willing to submit to all things which the Lord seeth fit to inflict upon him, even as a child doth submit to his father."
Wayne
Wayne
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Another good narration.
Part 12 is almost perfect.
At 3:11.5 she may claim the duties of marriage from him. You said upon.
I also found it interesting that throughout (up until the last paragraph or so) it was always the woman who was the one who erred, and the man the 'put upon' one.
Wayne
Part 12 is almost perfect.
At 3:11.5 she may claim the duties of marriage from him. You said upon.
I also found it interesting that throughout (up until the last paragraph or so) it was always the woman who was the one who erred, and the man the 'put upon' one.
Wayne
Wayne
We never really grow up, we just learn how to act in public.
We never really grow up, we just learn how to act in public.