[COMPLETE] LOOK TO THE STARS - philc
Chapter 2 PL note:
All okay except the intro as with chapter 1. Should be: Chapter [number] of [book title]. LibriVox disclaimer. [Book title] by [author]. Chapter [number].
All okay except the intro as with chapter 1. Should be: Chapter [number] of [book title]. LibriVox disclaimer. [Book title] by [author]. Chapter [number].
Sections 0, 1, and 2 now PL OK.
Section 0 doesn't have a title, but I suggest you put something like "Prologue" in the MW so it isn't empty.
Section 0 doesn't have a title, but I suggest you put something like "Prologue" in the MW so it isn't empty.
CHAPTER 3 PL NOTES:
2:32 - Said: Marlin stared. Text: Marlin started.
4:21 - so unfortunate as to stop lead. Lead as in the metal, not as "to lead."
2:32 - Said: Marlin stared. Text: Marlin started.
4:21 - so unfortunate as to stop lead. Lead as in the metal, not as "to lead."
Chapter 3 now PL OK.
Chapter 4 PL notes:
1:05 - "Not yet, but you can't tell." sounds like "Not yet, but you can tell."
3:31 - he followed the scientist up the winding trail. “Winding” s/b like “finding”
Chapter 5 PL notes:
9:13 I've got to find 'em sounds like We’ve got to find 'em
Chapter 6 PL notes
5:18 - it doesn't count out." sounds like it doesn't count on.”
Chapter 4 PL notes:
1:05 - "Not yet, but you can't tell." sounds like "Not yet, but you can tell."
3:31 - he followed the scientist up the winding trail. “Winding” s/b like “finding”
Chapter 5 PL notes:
9:13 I've got to find 'em sounds like We’ve got to find 'em
Chapter 6 PL notes
5:18 - it doesn't count out." sounds like it doesn't count on.”
Thank you very much. I've fixed everything and re-uploaded it. I've uploaded four chapters more too
In Chapter X i tried to go slower and tried to be more fluent.
When you listen to Chapter X would you please tell me, if you don't mind, if the reading goes better/worse
¿Can you understand clearly everything i read? my perception about it goes like a rollercoaster, sometimes i think i nailed it, and some times i am not so sure of what i've done
Should i read slower?
In Chapter X i tried to go slower and tried to be more fluent.
When you listen to Chapter X would you please tell me, if you don't mind, if the reading goes better/worse
¿Can you understand clearly everything i read? my perception about it goes like a rollercoaster, sometimes i think i nailed it, and some times i am not so sure of what i've done
Should i read slower?
Chapter 4, 5 and 6 now PL OK.
Chapters 7, 8, 9, and 10 PL OK.
Chapters 7, 8, 9, and 10 PL OK.
You don’t read too fast, so don’t worry about that. You could pause a bit more between sentences, especially when lines of dialogue switch between characters. I noticed that your recent chapters are mistake-free, so I think you are on the right track.
You’re making amazing progress for your first solo. Some new soloists take almost a year to finish a project. Your recording quality is quite good, and your edits are very clean.
You’re making amazing progress for your first solo. Some new soloists take almost a year to finish a project. Your recording quality is quite good, and your edits are very clean.
Thanks so much for the feedback i'll try to pause a bit more between sentences, it will also give me some more air to breath thanks a lot.sjmarky wrote: ↑April 23rd, 2021, 4:50 pm You don’t read too fast, so don’t worry about that. You could pause a bit more between sentences, especially when lines of dialogue switch between characters. I noticed that your recent chapters are mistake-free, so I think you are on the right track.
You’re making amazing progress for your first solo. Some new soloists take almost a year to finish a project. Your recording quality is quite good, and your edits are very clean.
Chapter 11 PL OK.
Chapter 12 note:
7:56 - 'For one exciting hour' sounds like 'For some exciting hour'
Chapter 12 note:
7:56 - 'For one exciting hour' sounds like 'For some exciting hour'
Chapter 12 now PL OK.
Chapter 13 PL note:
5:07 - 'through which ashes and solid residue could be forced' sounds like 'though which ashes and solid residue could be forced'
Chapter 14 notes:
5:29 - 'as they spread apart' sounds like 'that they spread apart'
8:27 - 'fingers closed around his windpipe.' 'Wind' should be like 'fin'
9:49 - 'forged in his smithy' 'Smithy' should be like 'pithy'
Chapter 13 PL note:
5:07 - 'through which ashes and solid residue could be forced' sounds like 'though which ashes and solid residue could be forced'
Chapter 14 notes:
5:29 - 'as they spread apart' sounds like 'that they spread apart'
8:27 - 'fingers closed around his windpipe.' 'Wind' should be like 'fin'
9:49 - 'forged in his smithy' 'Smithy' should be like 'pithy'