[COMPLETE][solo][Mystery] Cut by the County by Mary Elizabeth Braddon - kit

AdriPrev · Post by **AdriPrev** » June 22nd, 2021, 2:41 pm

Chapter 14 uploaded.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 23rd, 2021, 10:11 am

Have been out of commission for a few days. But I will get to it tomorrow. Jim

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 25th, 2021, 9:58 am

I am dedicating myself to you today! Jim

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 25th, 2021, 2:53 pm

Ok. I have done Chapters 12 and 13. Because you read so fast, you are prone to do some of it your way. Most of your way is close enough and I don't have to make you change, but especially in 13 you have too much that doesn't work. Also, I wonder why you don't recognize these mistakes when you go back over your recording to make corrections.

Chapter 12:
At 21:18 not wrench, but wretch.
Chapter 13:
At 7:33, change not chance a twenty.
At 8:28, you leave out a sentence.
At 8:30, same.
At 9:30, entanglement, not engagement.
At 21:31, last, not lips.
At 25:28, forfeited, not fortified.
Some of my times may be a bit off. If you have any questions, please ask.
Jim

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 26th, 2021, 8:45 am

I apologize. I think I used a different version to follow your recording. So ignore those issues I raised that do not apply. Jim

I THINK THE ONLY ONE THAT DOES NOT APPLY IS 8:30.

JIM AGAIN

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 26th, 2021, 11:53 am

Here are the errors for Chapter 14:
At 50, quay is pronounced key.
At 3:34, you omitted a sentence.
At 13:15, you put in a w sound in the word beguiled, which doesn't belong.
At 16:10, it should be that he, but it sounds like that she.
Fix and resend, and then we are ready to send it off to the publisher. Jim

AdriPrev · Post by **AdriPrev** » June 30th, 2021, 7:26 am

Thanks for the corrections! I'm not in my recording space at the moment, but once I am I'll fix those issues.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 30th, 2021, 9:53 am

Sounds good. Jim

AdriPrev · Post by **AdriPrev** » July 4th, 2021, 12:59 pm

Uploaded a corrected chapter 12. I'll have the other chapters up as soon as I can get my microphone to cooperate with me again.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 4th, 2021, 4:45 pm

Sounds good! Jim

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 5th, 2021, 6:51 am

Chapter 12 is PL OK! Jim

AdriPrev · Post by **AdriPrev** » July 6th, 2021, 2:39 pm

Chapters 13 and 14 corrected and uploaded.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 7th, 2021, 12:27 pm

Congrats! All are PL OK! I enjoyed it. Jim

AdriPrev · Post by **AdriPrev** » July 7th, 2021, 12:39 pm

Thanks for DPLing, Jim!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 7th, 2021, 1:18 pm

My pleasure! Jim