[COMPLETE][solo][Mystery] Cut by the County by Mary Elizabeth Braddon - kit
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Have been out of commission for a few days. But I will get to it tomorrow. Jim
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I am dedicating myself to you today! Jim
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Ok. I have done Chapters 12 and 13. Because you read so fast, you are prone to do some of it your way. Most of your way is close enough and I don't have to make you change, but especially in 13 you have too much that doesn't work. Also, I wonder why you don't recognize these mistakes when you go back over your recording to make corrections.
Chapter 12:
At 21:18 not wrench, but wretch.
Chapter 13:
At 7:33, change not chance a twenty.
At 8:28, you leave out a sentence.
At 8:30, same.
At 9:30, entanglement, not engagement.
At 21:31, last, not lips.
At 25:28, forfeited, not fortified.
Some of my times may be a bit off. If you have any questions, please ask.
Jim
Chapter 12:
At 21:18 not wrench, but wretch.
Chapter 13:
At 7:33, change not chance a twenty.
At 8:28, you leave out a sentence.
At 8:30, same.
At 9:30, entanglement, not engagement.
At 21:31, last, not lips.
At 25:28, forfeited, not fortified.
Some of my times may be a bit off. If you have any questions, please ask.
Jim
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I apologize. I think I used a different version to follow your recording. So ignore those issues I raised that do not apply. Jim
I THINK THE ONLY ONE THAT DOES NOT APPLY IS 8:30.
JIM AGAIN
I THINK THE ONLY ONE THAT DOES NOT APPLY IS 8:30.
JIM AGAIN
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Here are the errors for Chapter 14:
At 50, quay is pronounced key.
At 3:34, you omitted a sentence.
At 13:15, you put in a w sound in the word beguiled, which doesn't belong.
At 16:10, it should be that he, but it sounds like that she.
Fix and resend, and then we are ready to send it off to the publisher. Jim
At 50, quay is pronounced key.
At 3:34, you omitted a sentence.
At 13:15, you put in a w sound in the word beguiled, which doesn't belong.
At 16:10, it should be that he, but it sounds like that she.
Fix and resend, and then we are ready to send it off to the publisher. Jim
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Congrats! All are PL OK! I enjoyed it. Jim