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Thank you, and sorry I've fallen behind. Sections 6, 15, and 20 are all PL OK (and, as usual, impressively read).
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Sections 14 and 19 are ready for PL.
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Thanks! Section 14 is PL OK. One small thing in section 19, which may or may not be worth altering:
At 0:50 for “that flies melodiously” I heard “that flies SO melodiously”
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0:50: Removed SO.JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑June 11th, 2021, 10:03 amThanks! Section 14 is PL OK. One small thing in section 19, which may or may not be worth altering:
At 0:50 for “that flies melodiously” I heard “that flies SO melodiously”
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Thanks! Section 19 is PL OK.
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Uploaded Sections 65 and 73.
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Sections 65 and 73 are PL OK. (Also powerful in their understatement, both as written and as performed.)
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Uploaded Section 72.
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Thank you!
Two corrections:
"I live to prove the groping clod is surely more than simple dust" is read beginning at 1:25 and then repeated at 1:31
At 1:41 I hear "BEAUTIFY the carnal crust" for "BEATIFY the carnal crust"
Two corrections:
"I live to prove the groping clod is surely more than simple dust" is read beginning at 1:25 and then repeated at 1:31
At 1:41 I hear "BEAUTIFY the carnal crust" for "BEATIFY the carnal crust"
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Section 7 ready for Spot PL.JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑May 5th, 2021, 4:40 pm In Section 7:
0:40
For “The chaste clean ladies pass THEM by”
I hear “The chaste clean ladies pass HIM by”
0:48
For “They wrap their wounds IN pride”
I hear “They wrap their wounds WITH pride”
0:40: THEM by
0:48: IN pride
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Uploaded Section 16.
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Thanks! Section 7 is now PL OK. One minor note in Section 16: at 1:09 for "Death CUT the strings.." I heard "Death CUTS the strings..."
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And somehow I'd missed Section 21. One small change there: at 1:15 for “Why should SHE think it devil’s art” I hear “Why should HE think it”
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Section 62 is Ready For PL.
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Section 16 is ready for Spot PL.JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑June 19th, 2021, 12:42 pmThanks! Section 7 is now PL OK. One minor note in Section 16: at 1:09 for "Death CUT the strings.." I heard "Death CUTS the strings..."
1:09 - CUT
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