(Complete) Color by Countee Cullen - lt

[JoannaHoyt]

Thank you, and sorry I've fallen behind. Sections 6, 15, and 20 are all PL OK (and, as usual, impressively read).

[lethargilistic]

Sections 14 and 19 are ready for PL.

[JoannaHoyt]

Sections 14 and 19 are ready for PL.

Thanks! Section 14 is PL OK. One small thing in section 19, which may or may not be worth altering:
At 0:50 for “that flies melodiously” I heard “that flies SO melodiously”

[lethargilistic]

Sections 14 and 19 are ready for PL.

Thanks! Section 14 is PL OK. One small thing in section 19, which may or may not be worth altering:
At 0:50 for “that flies melodiously” I heard “that flies SO melodiously”

0:50: Removed SO.

[JoannaHoyt]

0:50: Removed SO.

Thanks! Section 19 is PL OK.

[lethargilistic]

Uploaded Sections 65 and 73.

[JoannaHoyt]

Uploaded Sections 65 and 73.

Sections 65 and 73 are PL OK. (Also powerful in their understatement, both as written and as performed.)

[lethargilistic]

Uploaded Section 72.

[JoannaHoyt]

Thank you!
Two corrections:
"I live to prove the groping clod is surely more than simple dust" is read beginning at 1:25 and then repeated at 1:31
At 1:41 I hear "BEAUTIFY the carnal crust" for "BEATIFY the carnal crust"

[lethargilistic]

In Section 7:
0:40
For “The chaste clean ladies pass THEM by”
I hear “The chaste clean ladies pass HIM by”
0:48
For “They wrap their wounds IN pride”
I hear “They wrap their wounds WITH pride”

Section 7 ready for Spot PL.

0:40: THEM by
0:48: IN pride

[lethargilistic]

Uploaded Section 16.

[JoannaHoyt]

Uploaded Section 16.

Thanks! Section 7 is now PL OK. One minor note in Section 16: at 1:09 for "Death CUT the strings.." I heard "Death CUTS the strings..."

[JoannaHoyt]

And somehow I'd missed Section 21. One small change there: at 1:15 for “Why should SHE think it devil’s art” I hear “Why should HE think it”

[lethargilistic]

Section 62 is Ready For PL.

[lethargilistic]

Uploaded Section 16.

Thanks! Section 7 is now PL OK. One minor note in Section 16: at 1:09 for "Death CUT the strings.." I heard "Death CUTS the strings..."

Section 16 is ready for Spot PL.

1:09 - CUT