COMPLETE: The Able McLaughlins by Margaret Wilson - jo
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Greetings, Mark. Section 4 is ready for PL.
Thanks,
Warren
Thanks,
Warren
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Mark,
I forgot to mention that I deliberately substituted “Wully” for “he” in the first sentence of section 4. I felt that this change would help to better orient the listener. If you disagree I will record that sentence again as it was written.
Thanks,
Warren
I forgot to mention that I deliberately substituted “Wully” for “he” in the first sentence of section 4. I felt that this change would help to better orient the listener. If you disagree I will record that sentence again as it was written.
Thanks,
Warren
I think, you did the right thing, Warren. To start a chapter with a pronoun is not fair to the listener. Ch.4 PL OK
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский
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Thanks for the PL, Mark.
Warren
Warren
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Hi Mark,
Section 5 is ready for PL.
The free time this weekend that I normally use for recording was used up by the necessity to dig out after the big snowfall. Sigh . . . I should be able to post section 6 next weekend but it might be 3 weeks from now before I am able to post section 7.
Warren
Section 5 is ready for PL.
The free time this weekend that I normally use for recording was used up by the necessity to dig out after the big snowfall. Sigh . . . I should be able to post section 6 next weekend but it might be 3 weeks from now before I am able to post section 7.
Warren
I am in no rush, Warren, but sure, I'm on the edge to know what's nextSciguyvoice wrote: ↑January 31st, 2021, 11:18 am Hi Mark,
Section 5 is ready for PL.
The free time this weekend that I normally use for recording was used up by the necessity to dig out after the big snowfall. Sigh . . . I should be able to post section 6 next weekend but it might be 3 weeks from now before I am able to post section 7.
Warren
Sec.5 PL OK
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский
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Hi Mark,
Section 6 is now ready for your PL.
Cheers,
Warren
Section 6 is now ready for your PL.
Cheers,
Warren
I kept my ears busy while digging out after the snowfall.
Sec.6 is PL OK
Sec.6 is PL OK
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский
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Thanks for the quick PL. Stay safe and warm.
Warren
Warren
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Hi Mark,
Section 7 is ready for PL. A lot of emotions in this one.
Warren
Section 7 is ready for PL. A lot of emotions in this one.
Warren
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Thanks for the PL, Mark. I must say that I have really enjoyed narrating this novel.
Warren
Warren
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Hello Mark,
Another section is ready for your PL.
Many thanks,
Warren
Another section is ready for your PL.
Many thanks,
Warren
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Thanks for the PL, Mark.
Warren
Warren