[COMPLETE] Christian Science by Mark Twain - tg

johng · Post by **johng** » January 6th, 2021, 2:08 pm

06 is done

ELDN · Post by **ELDN** » January 9th, 2021, 4:18 pm

I'll be reviewing these tomorrow, I've had a busy week so far.

Thanks,
ELDN

johng · Post by **johng** » January 10th, 2021, 5:09 am

Poco a poco!
No hurry

Thanks

johng · Post by **johng** » January 10th, 2021, 11:42 am

07, 08, and 09 are done

ELDN · Post by **ELDN** » January 16th, 2021, 12:08 pm

It's been a long week, but over MLK weekend I should be able to PL most or all of what's here so far!

Thanks for your patience,
ELDN

johng · Post by **johng** » January 16th, 2021, 12:34 pm

Tnx ELDN!
Stay safe!!!

ELDN · Post by **ELDN** » January 16th, 2021, 2:40 pm

Hello Johng,

I have PLed the second chapter!

Here are my notes:

Chapter 2

4:30 -> "a mysterious emotion usable when her tail"
un-usable is said instead of usable

4:55 -> "foolish imaginings are profanation and blasphemy,"
profanations is said instead of profanation

8:27 -> "I blushed for the word, but it was out before I could stop it."
and is said instead of but

11:13 -> "In this Third Degree, as we know by the revelations of Christian Science,"
all is added in-between "by" and "the"

16:57 -> "Well it is no matter,"
not is said instead of no

18:59 -> "the immovable basis of an Apodictical Principle."
The pronunciation of the word "Apodictical doesn't seem quite right. It is pronounced correctly at around 19:16

19:50 -> "nothing can fail; the Mind is master, and"
matter is said instead of master

22:36 -> "where she had a place prepared of God."
for is said instead of of

All of the other specifications are good to go!
ELDN

johng · Post by **johng** » January 16th, 2021, 2:50 pm

Great work!!!!

Thanks!!
(Boy, I’ll have to be more careful!!!)

ELDN · Post by **ELDN** » January 16th, 2021, 3:21 pm

Hello again,

I have PLed chapter 3!

Here are my notes:

Chapter 3

I'm not sure if the intro has to be word-perfect, but it isn't.

3:00 -> "or so interest me in other ways as to make me forget"
the word as is dropped from the sentence

5:25 -> "for I have talked with them; but in all cases they"
the word the is added in between "all" and "cases"

That is all, sound quality is good!

I look forward to your corrections,
ELDN

johng · Post by **johng** » January 16th, 2021, 3:42 pm

ELDN wrote: ↑January 16th, 2021, 3:21 pm Hello again,

I have PLed chapter 3!

Here are my notes:

Chapter 3

I'm not sure if the intro has to be word-perfect, but it isn't.

3:00 -> "or so interest me in other ways as to make me forget"
the word as is dropped from the sentence

5:25 -> "for I have talked with them; but in all cases they"
the word the is added in between "all" and "cases"

That is all, sound quality is good!

I look forward to your corrections,
ELDN

02 is corrected and sent in!!

johng · Post by **johng** » January 17th, 2021, 7:15 am

ELDN wrote: ↑January 16th, 2021, 3:21 pm Hello again,

I have PLed chapter 3!

Here are my notes:

Chapter 3

I'm not sure if the intro has to be word-perfect, but it isn't.

I see what you mean...I think the variation is OK...just putting my name in a different place.
I'm sending in the corrected chapter

johng · Post by **johng** » January 17th, 2021, 7:46 am

03 (corrected) is in.

johng · Post by **johng** » January 18th, 2021, 9:29 am

10 is done

ELDN · Post by **ELDN** » January 18th, 2021, 7:43 pm

I have Spot PLed chapter 2 and it is OK!

ELDN · Post by **ELDN** » January 18th, 2021, 7:47 pm

I have Spot PLed chapter 3 and it is OK!