[SOLO]A Broken Bond by Nicholas Carter-mas

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geoffbl
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Post by geoffbl » November 17th, 2020, 1:28 am

Hi Lora,
Please find chapter 3 ready for PL.


Thanks for 1 & 2

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Post by ADKreader1122 » November 17th, 2020, 12:14 pm

Thanks for letting me know about the introductory information. PL Okay for Chapter 3.

Lora

geoffbl
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Post by geoffbl » November 19th, 2020, 2:40 am

Hi Lora,
Please find chapter 4 ready for PL

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Post by ADKreader1122 » November 20th, 2020, 5:07 pm

Hello--
Chapter #4 is PL Okay. It's going well, Geoff!

Lora

geoffbl
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Post by geoffbl » November 22nd, 2020, 3:15 am

Hi Lora, Please find Chapter 5 ready for PL


Yes , I am enjoying enjoying it.

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Post by ADKreader1122 » November 23rd, 2020, 12:57 pm

PL Okay for Chapter 5. Lora

geoffbl
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Post by geoffbl » November 24th, 2020, 2:08 am

Hi Lora,
Please find Chapter 6 ready for PL

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Post by ADKreader1122 » November 24th, 2020, 1:49 pm

Hi Geoff,
For Chapter 6 there are two PL notes--please review/fix if you agree. At 5:30 the phrase ...he snarled, "You would, you would!" should be "You would, would you!" and at 7:05 in the phrase "...he felt a strange admiration.....loyalty..." the word "unflattering" should be changed to "unfaltering."

Thanks,
Lora

geoffbl
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Post by geoffbl » Yesterday, 2:59 am

Hi Lora,
Thanks for picking up those mistakes , I don't know how I missed them . I have uploaded a new Chapter 6 file with them fixed ready for your approval.

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