COMPLETE [SOLO]A Broken Bond by Nicholas Carter-mas

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » March 9th, 2021, 9:24 am

Geoff,
Chapters 36 and 37 are PL Okay.

Thanks,
Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » March 13th, 2021, 2:27 am

Hi Lora,
Please find Chapters 38,39 and 40 ready for PL.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » March 15th, 2021, 1:08 pm

Hi Geoff,
I've marked those three chapters as PL Okay; in chapter 38 at 1:28 you may want to change "didn't" to "needn't" in "You needn't pride yourself..." and at 9:09 you could omit the word "at" in "...looked what he was..."

Thanks,
Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » March 17th, 2021, 2:27 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑March 15th, 2021, 1:08 pm Hi Geoff,
I've marked those three chapters as PL Okay; in chapter 38 at 1:28 you may want to change "didn't" to "needn't" in "You needn't pride yourself..." and at 9:09 you could omit the word "at" in "...looked what he was..."

Thanks,
Lora

Hi Lora,
Thanks for finding those, I have updated them and re-uploaded the file for spot PL.

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » March 20th, 2021, 1:59 am

Hi Lora,
Please find chapters 41 and 42 ready for PL.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » March 22nd, 2021, 1:11 pm

PL Okay for chapters 41 and 42, Geoff.

Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » March 30th, 2021, 2:23 am

Hi Lora,
Please find chapters 43 and 44 ready for PL

Only 2 more to go

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » March 30th, 2021, 1:54 pm

Hello Geoff,
I've marked chapters 43 and 44 as PL Okay, but I have several notes.

For chapter 43 in the beginning, you recorded "Saturday" instead of "Sunday"--it wouldn't matter except that the next day is referred to later on and it's Monday. Also, at 4:55 I think there's a typo in the text; "lids" should be "lips" for the sentence "...and the lips were curled in a mocking smile."

For chapter 44 at :36 "cautious" should be changed to "curious."

Thanks--it's finishing up nicely!
Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » March 31st, 2021, 4:01 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑March 30th, 2021, 1:54 pm Hello Geoff,
I've marked chapters 43 and 44 as PL Okay, but I have several notes.

For chapter 43 in the beginning, you recorded "Saturday" instead of "Sunday"--it wouldn't matter except that the next day is referred to later on and it's Monday. Also, at 4:55 I think there's a typo in the text; "lids" should be "lips" for the sentence "...and the lips were curled in a mocking smile."

For chapter 44 at :36 "cautious" should be changed to "curious."

Thanks--it's finishing up nicely!
Lora

Thanks for that Lora, I will fix them up and let you know. I thought it must have been lips.

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » April 1st, 2021, 2:48 am

Hi Lora,
I have uploaded the files again with the fixes for 43 and 44 done.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » April 2nd, 2021, 12:18 pm

Great--PL Okay now. Thanks for the fixes.

Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » April 11th, 2021, 4:02 am

Hi Lora,
The final two chapters 45 and 46 are ready for PL

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » April 11th, 2021, 2:20 pm

Hi Geoff,
Congratulations on finishing the last two chapters! I've marked them PL Okay. If you want to check chapter 46 at 5:02, you could change "lunging" to "lugging" in the phrase "...press it without lugging in anything..." for the sake of meaning.

Great job--thanks for letting me DPL.
Best,
Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » April 12th, 2021, 3:16 am

Hi Lora,
I have fixed the mistake in chapter 46 and uploaded it again.

Thanks you for all your help PL ing this for me . If you know of any other Nick Carter ones I can do let me know. I didn't realise until I was 3/4 of the way through this that is has also been done as a collaborative project.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » April 12th, 2021, 6:16 am

Geoff--
I will let you know if I see anything, though I think several stories have been done already. It's okay to have more than one version; sometimes it's nice to have just one reader, and your recording is good.

Let me know if you start a new project and need proof listening--you can always PM me.

Best,
Lora