(COMPLETE) Divine Conduct or the mystery of providence - tg

Post by **TriciaG** » October 24th, 2020, 9:27 am

Thanks for the PL, carleesbale! I've updated the Magic Window.

GillH - thanks for DPL'ing! Feel free to listen to the first 2 sections if you would like to catch up.

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » October 24th, 2020, 10:01 am

GillH wrote: ↑October 24th, 2020, 7:50 am Happy to be DPL, if you want.

Yes, Thankyou!

GillH · Post by **GillH** » October 24th, 2020, 12:29 pm

I will listen to what's been done already to get the feel of it.
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GillH · Post by **GillH** » October 26th, 2020, 7:19 am

I've listened to Sections 1 and 2. You have a very calm voice: pleasing to listen to.

These have already been PL'd, of course, but I noticed a couple of errors in Bible passage references. I could PM you with the details. If you want to leave them, that's your choice.

Looking forward to Section 3!

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » October 26th, 2020, 7:22 am

Thank you - yes, could you let me know the mistakes on the Bible references - I probably got confused with the Roman numerals!

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » October 27th, 2020, 6:59 am

Section 3 uploaded and ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/divineconduct_03_flavel_128kb.mp3

Length: 42.44

GillH · Post by **GillH** » October 27th, 2020, 9:26 am

PL for Section 3:

Nicely read again.

Just a couple of things:
29:18 repeat of "What a special mercy was it for us to have the excresences [sic] of corruption" (top pf p48)
31:11 "us" missing in "when they could have us no more" (p48)
41:27 missing "3" before "It is usual with God" (bottom of page 53)

(There's also a loud 'crunch' at 12:42 just on "This hath invited ... " (p39) you might want to de-amplify as you're making the other changes.)

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » October 28th, 2020, 8:54 am

I have gone through the PL notes for section 3, thank you.

12.42 - the crunch is gone - I re recoded the phase that it in, as I wasn't able to remove it separately.

29:18 I have taken out the repeat.

31.11 Sorry I couldn't hear a missing 'us' !

41.27 I put in the missing '3'

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/divineconduct_03_flavel_128kb.mp3

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » October 29th, 2020, 3:47 am

Section 4 uploaded and ready for PL.

GillH · Post by **GillH** » October 29th, 2020, 4:20 pm

PL for Section 4;

Excellent.
There is at 1457 a missing reference: Philemon, 10-16 (page 61)
Up to you whether you want to insert it.

GillH · Post by **GillH** » October 29th, 2020, 4:22 pm

Section 3 PL OK!

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » November 4th, 2020, 6:38 am

Sections 5 and 6 uploaded and ready for PL!

GillH · Post by **GillH** » November 4th, 2020, 12:32 pm

PL for Section 5:

There's just one small thing which I think should be corrected -
12:21 "Be" said for "but" in "But they that will be rich ... "(bottom p78)

Otherwise great

GillH · Post by **GillH** » November 4th, 2020, 12:47 pm

PL for Section 6:
Basically PL OK and marked as such, although if you want to check:

* at 9:32 there's a 'stutter' that makes the reference sound like "Genesis 30 to 2, 10" - which might be confusing for those looking up the references (page 84).
* at 12:10 you say "acidity" for "assiduity" (unless this is your pronunciation of the word?) (page 85)

If you're making the other changes, you might also want to pronounce Michal "Meekhal" (at 6:13, page 82) rather than as the boy's name Michael, in case that is confusing for listeners, as it is about husbands and wives.

Cheers.

RuthP · Post by **RuthP** » November 5th, 2020, 4:56 am

GillH wrote: ↑November 4th, 2020, 12:32 pm PL for Section 5:

There's just one small thing which I think should be corrected -
12:21 "Be" said for "but" in "But they that will be rich ... "(bottom p78)

Otherwise great

Thank you!
I have replaced the 'be' with 'but' and re uploaded.