Twilight in Italy by D H Lawrence - dc

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Post by Newgatenovelist » September 26th, 2020, 5:17 am

Section 2 is spot PL OK.
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Post by Newgatenovelist » September 28th, 2020, 7:44 am

One comment for section 3:

10.06-10.13
In the sensual ecstasy, having drunk all blood [heard Fire] and devoured all flesh, I am become again the eternal Fire, I am infinite.
I’m being a bit more stringent on this because I’m Pling it closer to how I do poetry. Lawrence was (in my opinion) one of those rare authors whose skill in poetry emerges in the lyrical prose of some of the best passages of the short stories and novels. However, you are more than free to disagree with me! If it’s not a change you agree with, please flick it to PL OK.

A few of the Ps were on the cusp of plosives – I don’t know if you’ve moved your mic.

My usual notes for future reference:
https://www.lexico.com/definition/purposive

https://www.lexico.com/definition/ignominy

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Post by Newgatenovelist » September 30th, 2020, 7:28 am

Section 3 is spot PL OK.
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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 4th, 2020, 6:45 am

Section 5 is PL OK.

For another time:
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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 11th, 2020, 6:34 am

Sections 6 and 7 are PL OK.
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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 12th, 2020, 7:00 am

Section 8 is PL OK.
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