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I've also made the indicated repairs to previous sections, and they're ready for your spot checking.

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jhturner wrote: August 26th, 2021, 8:25 am Alexander, I've posted Appendix Note C for you, in two parts.
Dear Joanne, section 15 has no problems. 🐠
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jhturner wrote: September 1st, 2021, 1:52 pm Anyhow, following your own strategy, I believe it would be better to continue to read footnotes at 40:40 till the end – “The stat. 1 E. 2 de frangontibus priso (…) which repeals the judgment of life and death at the Common law” (p. 131 of the book)
Oh, Joanne, I meant only text in English, but it seems you extended that to the French too... Well, that`s even better, perhaps. 👍 🐧
Section 16, just as 13 & 14, is PL OK.
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A-ha, it seems that instead of quoting the previous message, I edited it, having created a new one...
Well, I hope that`s not a problem. 🐽
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No problem. My French is non-existent (as you no doubt detected), but I rely on the principle that everything is translated phonetically!

I've posted section 17 for you (Note F). It took me a while to figure out that when Jefferson writes 15-16, it's actually a fraction (15/16).

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jhturner wrote: September 8th, 2021, 1:51 pm No problem. My French is non-existent (as you no doubt detected),
No, to tell the truth I didn`t notice it - being y own French for sure not better than your) 💐
I've posted section 17 for you (Note F). It took me a while to figure out that when Jefferson writes 15-16, it's actually a fraction (15/16).
No PL issues detected, Joanne. I believe I would have had even bigger problems to understand those fractions, if I did try to read that for the first time. 🐾

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Sections 18 and 19 are ready for you--that brings us to the end of the Miscellanies and to the start of Correspondence.

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jhturner wrote: September 13th, 2021, 1:21 pm Sections 18
Sec 18 PL notes:

I agree with you about not reading “Notes on His Accomplishments” which is indicated as section title in the MW, for I don`t see it in the text. But I also believe it would be better to say “Appendix, note G” instead of simply “Note G” – moreover, considering that all previous parts of Appendix you`ve said just in that way... Do you agree? 🦔 🌹

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jhturner wrote: September 13th, 2021, 1:21 pm Section 19
Sec 19 PL notes:

I agree with you about not reading “Letters from Geo. Washington re appointment as Secretary of State”, which is indicated as section title in the MW, for I don`t see it in the text. But I also believe it would be better to say “Appendix, note H” instead of simply “Note H” – moreover, considering that all previous parts of Appendix you`ve said just in that way... Do you agree? 🍑

Missing “The Honorable Thomas Jefferson.” at the end.

The rest is very good. 🍰 🦜
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I do agree, and I'll get those added.

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I've added the reference to the Appendix to sections 18 and 19 (both at the beginning and the end of each section), reposted, and adjusted the times.

In section 19, I believe from the text that the phrase The Hon. Thomas Jefferson indicates the addressee of the letter, so I put that at the beginning, just before the salutation "Sir," rather than at the end (where it appears in the written text). Do you agree?

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jhturner wrote: September 18th, 2021, 10:37 am In section 19, I believe from the text that the phrase The Hon. Thomas Jefferson indicates the addressee of the letter, so I put that at the beginning, just before the salutation "Sir," rather than at the end (where it appears in the written text). Do you agree?
All right, Joanne! Have a pleasant weekend! 🍦
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jhturner wrote: September 18th, 2021, 10:37 am I've added the reference to the Appendix to sections 18 and 19 (both at the beginning and the end of each section), reposted, and adjusted the times.
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Alexander, I've posted the first four letters of correspondence for you. I wish they were in the printed volume in some sort of order--even chronological would be nice--but, alas, they are not. They seem to skip all over the place, making it sometimes tough for me to figure out what Jefferson is writing about. But they are interesting--more history I never learned in school!

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Alexander, I've posted two more pieces of correspondence for you.

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