[COMPLETE] Trolley Folly by Henry Wallace Phillips - icequeen

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » September 3rd, 2020, 2:33 pm

Section 1 is ready for PL. I rerecorded the intro and outro and didn't change anything else. As per the revised first post, I am calling each section "story".

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » September 3rd, 2020, 3:42 pm

Section 1 is PL OK!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » September 7th, 2020, 12:53 pm

Section 2 is ready for PL. Another fun one.

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » September 8th, 2020, 6:38 pm

Section 2 PL notes:

@12:30: missing phrase (in red) - … and back--and out again and deliberated between 2 and 35 while the wheel went …

Small item, but important for context, IMHO. See what you think.

Thank you,

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » September 12th, 2020, 12:19 pm

DACSoft wrote: ↑September 8th, 2020, 6:38 pm Section 2 PL notes:

@12:30: missing phrase (in red) - … and back--and out again and deliberated between 2 and 35 while the wheel went …

Small item, but important for context, IMHO. See what you think.

Thank you,

You are absolutely right! Missing text added.

Story 2 is ready for spot PL.

Thank you!

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » September 12th, 2020, 12:48 pm

Section 2 is PL OK!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » September 13th, 2020, 1:45 pm

Story 3 is ready for PL.

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » September 18th, 2020, 11:25 am

Section 3 is PL OK!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » September 21st, 2020, 12:22 pm

Section 04 ready for PL, Señor.

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » September 25th, 2020, 11:29 am

Section 4 is PL OK!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » September 27th, 2020, 12:45 pm

Section 5 is ready for PL.

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » September 30th, 2020, 4:00 pm

Section 5 is PL OK!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » October 5th, 2020, 6:00 pm

Section 06 is ready for PL.

DACSoft · Post by **DACSoft** » October 6th, 2020, 12:26 pm

Section 6 is PL OK!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » October 13th, 2020, 6:06 pm

Section 7 is ready for PL.