COMPLETE: South Sea Tales by Jack London -jo

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » September 8th, 2020, 7:07 am

Hi Warren,

I apologize for the confusion, I should have caught it earlier

You head post tells to start each section with "Chapter #"
You say "Story #", I don't think this is a problem.
The problem starts when you say "Story 2", it's in fact story 1, part 2, and when you say "Story 3", it's in fact story 2.
Confusing, isn't it?
There are two possible solutions:
1. Stitch sections 1 and 2 back together, as you planned originally.
2. Rerecord the intros / outros to say "story #, part #" / "end of part # , story [name]". Optionally you could add something like "to be continued" to the end of the 1st section.

The last story is really long and will have to be cut anyway, so maybe the 2nd solution is the way to go?
Almost forgot -- otherwise sec.3 is PL OK

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 9th, 2020, 3:10 pm

Hi Mark,

Good points all around. I will take a look and will likely re-record the intros and outros.

Warren

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 12th, 2020, 10:19 am

Hi Mark,

I decided to dispense with the story numbers. The Intros will contain section numbers that will correspond with the section numbers in the MW. So the intros/outros will look something like this.

Section 1 of South Sea Tales by Jack London
[LV disclaimer]
South Sea Tales by Jack London, The House of Mapuhi, part 1
outro: End of part 1 of The House of Mapuhi

Section 2 of South Sea Tales by Jack London
[LV disclaimer]
The House of Mapuhi, part 2
outro: End of The House of Mapuhi

Section 3 of South Sea Tales by Jack London
[LV disclaimer]
The Whale Tooth
outro: End of The Whale Tooth

Let me know if this looks reasonable or if you prefer something different.

Thanks,

Warren

September 12th, 2020, 11:01 am

It looks fine to me, Warren. I did something similar for the last collection of short stories I read.

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 12th, 2020, 11:15 am

Thanks, Jo!

Warren

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » September 12th, 2020, 11:25 am

Looks good to me, Warren, but you already have Jo's approval, that should be enough

Please let me know when ready for spot PL!

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 13th, 2020, 4:11 pm

Hi Mark,

It looks like my intro/outro edits won’t be ready until the coming weekend. Other stuff took up my time this weekend.

Cheers,

Warren

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 19th, 2020, 2:58 pm

Hi Mark,

Please spot PL sections 1-3 for the revised intro / outros. Section 4 is a new addition that requires a full PL.

Many thanks,

Warren

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 26th, 2020, 12:15 pm

Hi Mark,

Section 5 is ready for PL.

Cheers,

Warren

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » September 26th, 2020, 6:03 pm

Mauki -- what a story! Not for the faint of heart!

Sec.1-4 are PL OK

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » September 26th, 2020, 8:21 pm

Thanks for the PL, Mark. Jack London is such a wonderful writer. Vivid stories with incredible detail. I can see why you loved reading his stories when you were a kid.

Warren

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » September 27th, 2020, 8:29 am

Sciguyvoice wrote: ↑September 26th, 2020, 8:21 pm I can see why you loved reading his stories when you were a kid.

Mauki wasn't in my collection for kids

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » October 3rd, 2020, 1:13 pm

Hi Mark,

I broke the next story, The Heathen, into two parts of roughly 27 minutes each. I found this to be a very touching story, especially the 2nd part. I hope that you enjoy it.

Stay safe,

Warren

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » October 7th, 2020, 7:18 am

That's what the wonderful writers are for; their stories are both touching and not for the faint of heart!
Sec. 5,6,7 are PL OK

, thank you for the pleasure.

Sciguyvoice · Post by **Sciguyvoice** » October 7th, 2020, 6:12 pm

Mark,

Thank you for the PL’s.

Warren