I felt like in a stageplay now. Excellently narrated in character. And in some parts I really liked the sing-song of your voice. Quite dramatic, all of it. Perfectly PL ok, thank you Mark !
chulsky wrote: ↑August 20th, 2020, 1:09 pm
MaryAnn, would you please delete the two extra sections... I thought about breaking longer sections, but decided against it. Thank you!
excellent, your last section is a perfect PL ok. Eros was quite intense as a poem and you narrated it wonderfully. It's a worthy ending to the collection.
Thanks for this wonderful author you introduced me to.
And now the project is complete and can get archived. Have a nice weekend !!!