[MATH] Foundations of Geometry by David Hilbert - availle

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Rapunzelina
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Post by Rapunzelina » May 6th, 2020, 12:41 am

As PL goes, all sounds good, but I think you should make a distinction between (capital) "A, B, C" at 0:46 and (lower case) "a, b, c" at 0:53, so when you later mention "capital A" or "lower case a", the listener will (hopefully!) know whether it's a point or a line we're talking about.

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Post by jamnitzer » May 14th, 2020, 12:18 pm

I set the status to 'ready for PL' as I didn't find 'PL needed' as an option in the drop down menu.

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Post by Availle » May 14th, 2020, 1:58 pm

Actually, it's "see PL notes" since Rapunzelina has listened to the file and got her comments in. See the post just above yours, at the beginning of this page. :D
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Post by Rapunzelina » July 7th, 2020, 6:04 am

Great job, jamnitzer! :clap:

One PL note for Section 4: It stops just before Theorem 5, so all the rest of the text is missing from the recording (to be added).

Suggestion for Section 1: Since all the following recordings begin with "Chapter 1, Section #" I would suggest you also begin Section 1 with "Chapter 1, Section 1"; it is currently just Chapter 1.

You haven't responded to my comment (first post of this page) about whether you intend to differentiate between capital "A" and lower-case "a" in the recording, so I am holding off marking the rest of the recordings PL OK until you say if you are happy as is or want to make a distinction. Thanks :)


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Post by Rapunzelina » July 22nd, 2020, 4:16 am

Another round of applause for a job well done! :clap:

My only PL notes are about the endings:
Section 4 is lacking the 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Sections 8 - 12 are missing the "End of Section #" at the end.

I will go ahead and mark the previous sections PL OK, except Section 1, if you'd like to add "Section 1" in the intro as mentioned, for consistency. Thanks! :thumbs:

PS: The filenames are off, so when you re-upload, please use the _128kb suffix instead of the _16bit


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Post by Rapunzelina » August 1st, 2020, 9:10 am

:clap:

Section 1, PL Ok
Section 4, missing 5 seconds of silence at the end
Section 8, starts "Chapter 1, section 3" instead of section 8
Section 9, PL Ok
Section 10, PL Ok
Section 11, PL Ok
Section 12, PL Ok
Section 13, PL Ok
Section 14, PL Ok
Section 15, at 6:35, text is "If b and c", recording has "If a and b"
Section 16, optional fix, at 2:53 text is "find the point" (imperative), recording has "we find the point".




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Post by Rapunzelina » August 4th, 2020, 2:57 am

Sections 4, 8, 17, 15, 16 are PL OK!
jamnitzer wrote:
August 1st, 2020, 3:30 pm
thanks for your careful proofs.
You're welcome. You're doing such a great job with this project, it's the least I can do :D

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