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SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » December 29th, 2019, 8:32 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
December 29th, 2019, 1:20 pm
Things are heating up. Here are my thoughts:
  • Eunice is only becoming more suspicious
  • Only thing working against Eunice is the 'ghost' Aunt Abby saw. Eunice would know the house better than to go into Aunt Abby's room.
  • There is a possibility that someone was concealed, but the method of death is still unclear
  • Could someone have poisoned his food (raspberry jam?) earlier, then come back to make sure he was dead? But they said the doctor didn't think it was through the stomach...
  • Can't make any more guesses until more info is given
I won't say anything! But there will be answers in Chapter 9. I guess I need to do my best to make time to record it. :mrgreen:
lymiewithpurpose wrote:
December 29th, 2019, 1:20 pm
Now to notes. I was picky this time and you may want to ignore some of them. Only a few are pronunciation, you're sounding great!

1:29 – heard ‘unknown’ instead of ‘known’

7:04 – missing word ‘more’ (in ‘one more person’)

9:16/1:19 – very small optional note here, but instead of ‘administered’ I’m hearing ‘administrid’. The ending should be pronounced the same as stirred, instead of ‘strid’.

9:58 – yes, I know I’m being picky. Feel free to ignore. Heard ‘extERmety’ instead of ‘extREmity’ (good pronunciation here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/pronunciation/english/extremity)

10:46 – heard ‘mysteriously’ instead of ‘mysterious’

14:22 – heard ‘started’ instead of ‘startled’

22:30 – seems like ‘an irresponsible’ is mashed together

26:49 – heard ‘impertent’ instead of ‘impertenent’
Please be picky as much as you want! And I'd would like to fix them all. :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » December 29th, 2019, 9:59 pm

SaraHale wrote:
December 29th, 2019, 8:32 pm
I guess I need to do my best to make time to record it.
Don't pressure yourself too much, though I will never mind another chapter.
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » December 30th, 2019, 10:25 am

Quick question. When linking to the notes in the MW, how do you get it to the specific post? I can only get it to link to the top of the page.
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Post by SaraHale » December 30th, 2019, 11:43 am

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
December 30th, 2019, 10:25 am
Quick question. When linking to the notes in the MW, how do you get it to the specific post? I can only get it to link to the top of the page.
There is a paper icon before "by lymiewithpurpose » Today, 6:59 am". Right-click it then click on "Copy Link Address".
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » December 30th, 2019, 11:48 am

SaraHale wrote:
December 30th, 2019, 11:43 am
lymiewithpurpose wrote:
December 30th, 2019, 10:25 am
Quick question. When linking to the notes in the MW, how do you get it to the specific post? I can only get it to link to the top of the page.
There is a paper icon before "by lymiewithpurpose » Today, 6:59 am". Right-click it then click on "Copy Link Address".
It worked, thanks!
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Post by SaraHale » January 4th, 2020, 1:01 am

Hey, Campbell!

Happy New Year!

I've fixed chapter 8 and here are the timestamps: Bold = re-recorded.
  • @26:47 - They’ll ask impertinent questions.
  • @22:29 - as an irresponsible patient
  • @14:19 - and Aunt Abby looked a little startled at being addressed.
  • @10:43 - Never a case quite so mysterious, but nearly so.
  • @9:55 - he cried out, as one in an extremity of uncertainty.
  • @9:12 - You see, sir, with no knowledge of how the poison was administered—with no suspicion of any reason for its being administered—we are working in the dark—
  • @07:04 - If one more person says that to me I shall just perfectly fly!
  • @1:28 - Not any known or evident poison, but a subtle, mysteriously administered toxic agent of some sort—
Thanks! Have a nice day.
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » January 4th, 2020, 1:36 pm

Chapter 8 is OK! Thanks, as always, for making my Spot PL job easy.
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Post by SaraHale » January 4th, 2020, 10:47 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
January 4th, 2020, 1:36 pm
Chapter 8 is OK! Thanks, as always, for making my Spot PL job easy.
Thanks! Any time. :thumbs: Have a nice day!
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » January 11th, 2020, 7:38 am

Hey Campbell,

Chapter 9 is in the MW. And I'm editing chapter 10 right now. I forget to use Punch and roll this time so I have to do some cutting. :oops:

Have a nice day!
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » January 11th, 2020, 1:54 pm

You're right, chapter 9 did bring some answers. My question now is did Eunice see the play with anybody else? Here are notes.

0:39 – heard ‘unwielding’ instead of ‘unwieldly’

2:58 – extra ‘to’ in ‘have got to answer’ (heard ‘have to got to answer’)

4:53 – repeat of ‘as he began’

8:11 – ‘uncouth’ pronounced with an oo sound (as in moon)

17:36 – antagonism pronounced ‘an-TA-go-nism

18:52 – necessary pronounced ‘NE-ce-ssa-ry’

24:39 – heard ‘orderly’ instead of ‘ordinary’
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Post by SaraHale » January 11th, 2020, 8:54 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
January 11th, 2020, 1:54 pm
You're right, chapter 9 did bring some answers. My question now is did Eunice see the play with anybody else? Here are notes.

0:39 – heard ‘unwielding’ instead of ‘unwieldly’

2:58 – extra ‘to’ in ‘have got to answer’ (heard ‘have to got to answer’)

4:53 – repeat of ‘as he began’

8:11 – ‘uncouth’ pronounced with an oo sound (as in moon)

17:36 – antagonism pronounced ‘an-TA-go-nism

18:52 – necessary pronounced ‘NE-ce-ssa-ry’

24:39 – heard ‘orderly’ instead of ‘ordinary’
Thanks, Campbell. I'll fix them along with chapter 10. :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » January 12th, 2020, 11:12 am

Hey Campbell,

I've fixed chapter 9 and uploaded chapter 10. I hope you'll enjoy it. :thumbs:

Here are the PL Notes for chapter 9:
  • @24:39 - ordinary glass medicine dropper
  • @18:49 - but not if it is for any reason a necessary admission
  • @17:35 - to rouse antagonism
  • @8:07 - and as he was in every respect awkward and uncouth
  • Removed @4:51 - @4:52 - as he began, the first one.
  • @2:58 - have got (re-recorded)
  • @00:33 - his burly frame looking especially awkward and unwieldy in the gentle surroundings
Thanks for all you do! :9:
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » January 13th, 2020, 1:34 pm

Chapter 9 is OK! Looking forwards to Chapter 10.
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » January 13th, 2020, 2:36 pm

This book is getting good. I wonder who it is. They haven't talked about Elliot at all yet. Chapter 10:

2:46 – extra ‘when’ (should be ‘I went’ instead of ‘when I went’)

8:27 – heard ‘Mrs.’ instead of ‘Miss’

13:50 – heard ‘hartly’ instead of ‘hearty’

17:32 – heard ‘recitent’ instead of ‘reticent’

20:21 – heard ‘sumrise’ instead of ‘surmise’
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Post by SaraHale » January 13th, 2020, 9:06 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
January 13th, 2020, 2:36 pm
This book is getting good. I wonder who it is. They haven't talked about Elliot at all yet. Chapter 10:

2:46 – extra ‘when’ (should be ‘I went’ instead of ‘when I went’)

8:27 – heard ‘Mrs.’ instead of ‘Miss’

13:50 – heard ‘hartly’ instead of ‘hearty’

17:32 – heard ‘recitent’ instead of ‘reticent’

20:21 – heard ‘sumrise’ instead of ‘surmise’
Hey Campbell,

Thanks! I'm always happy to hear that my mistakes aren't more than 7. :mrgreen: Just you wait for chapter 11.

I'll do my best and record it today. :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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