lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑December 29th, 2019, 1:20 pm
Things are heating up. Here are my thoughts:
Eunice is only becoming more suspicious
Only thing working against Eunice is the 'ghost' Aunt Abby saw. Eunice would know the house better than to go into Aunt Abby's room.
There is a possibility that someone was concealed, but the method of death is still unclear
Could someone have poisoned his food (raspberry jam?) earlier, then come back to make sure he was dead? But they said the doctor didn't think it was through the stomach...
Can't make any more guesses until more info is given
I won't say anything! But there will be answers in Chapter 9. I guess I need to do my best to make time to record it.
lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑December 29th, 2019, 1:20 pm
Now to notes. I was picky this time and you may want to ignore some of them. Only a few are pronunciation, you're sounding great!
1:29 – heard ‘unknown’ instead of ‘known’
7:04 – missing word ‘more’ (in ‘one more person’)
9:16/1:19 – very small optional note here, but instead of ‘administered’ I’m hearing ‘administrid’. The ending should be pronounced the same as stirred, instead of ‘strid’.
lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑December 30th, 2019, 10:25 am
Quick question. When linking to the notes in the MW, how do you get it to the specific post? I can only get it to link to the top of the page.
There is a paper icon before "by lymiewithpurpose » Today, 6:59 am". Right-click it then click on "Copy Link Address".
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑December 30th, 2019, 10:25 am
Quick question. When linking to the notes in the MW, how do you get it to the specific post? I can only get it to link to the top of the page.
There is a paper icon before "by lymiewithpurpose » Today, 6:59 am". Right-click it then click on "Copy Link Address".
I've fixed chapter 8 and here are the timestamps: Bold = re-recorded.
@26:47 - They’ll ask impertinent questions.
@22:29 - as an irresponsible patient
@14:19 - and Aunt Abby looked a little startled at being addressed.
@10:43 - Never a case quite so mysterious, but nearly so.
@9:55 - he cried out, as one in an extremity of uncertainty.
@9:12 - You see, sir, with no knowledge of how the poison was administered—with no suspicion of any reason for its being administered—we are working in the dark—
@07:04 - If one more person says that to me I shall just perfectly fly!
@1:28 - Not any known or evident poison, but a subtle, mysteriously administered toxic agent of some sort—
Thanks! Have a nice day.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑January 11th, 2020, 1:54 pm
You're right, chapter 9 did bring some answers. My question now is did Eunice see the play with anybody else? Here are notes.
0:39 – heard ‘unwielding’ instead of ‘unwieldly’
2:58 – extra ‘to’ in ‘have got to answer’ (heard ‘have to got to answer’)
4:53 – repeat of ‘as he began’
8:11 – ‘uncouth’ pronounced with an oo sound (as in moon)
17:36 – antagonism pronounced ‘an-TA-go-nism
18:52 – necessary pronounced ‘NE-ce-ssa-ry’
24:39 – heard ‘orderly’ instead of ‘ordinary’
Thanks, Campbell. I'll fix them along with chapter 10.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑January 13th, 2020, 2:36 pm
This book is getting good. I wonder who it is. They haven't talked about Elliot at all yet. Chapter 10:
2:46 – extra ‘when’ (should be ‘I went’ instead of ‘when I went’)
8:27 – heard ‘Mrs.’ instead of ‘Miss’
13:50 – heard ‘hartly’ instead of ‘hearty’
17:32 – heard ‘recitent’ instead of ‘reticent’
20:21 – heard ‘sumrise’ instead of ‘surmise’
Hey Campbell,
Thanks! I'm always happy to hear that my mistakes aren't more than 7. Just you wait for chapter 11.
I'll do my best and record it today.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
