[SOLO] Raspberry Jam by Carolyn Wells - ke

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lymiewithpurpose
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » September 17th, 2019, 4:29 pm

Got Chapter 4 notes in:

1:30 – intolerable, heard interable

4:46 – I had a listen specifically to this line as you asked. I thought you did really well with it, my only suggestion would be that right now you have it as a pause between ‘thought it’ and ‘teased her’, and I would keep that together. This is an if/then statement (without the then), so if ‘he thought it teased her’, then ‘he would more frequently try Petruchio’s methods’. As you can see, these are two phrases being related (yet reading the phrase between the commas as one phrase if that makes sense). I don’t think it’s horrible if you skip correcting this.

10:36 – heard fortified vs forfeited

13:05 – ‘don’t you dare to do needlework’, ‘to’ missing but not a crucial edit

25:01 – missing word ‘say’
Campbell
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SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » September 18th, 2019, 2:57 am

Thanks, Campbell.
I'll fix the PL notes as soon as possible. :D
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » September 20th, 2019, 9:24 am

Hey Campbell,

Another quick update! I've recorded almost half of Chapter 5. I'll do my best to fix the PL Notes and finish Chapter 5.

What I wanted to talk about is that I across these following YouTube videos that I found them so helpful. But whether I can apply them or not is another matter. :lol:

Tips for reading fiction out loud:
Part 1: https://youtu.be/hg7xY_vLL54
Part 2: https://youtu.be/3GT9NbaogoE
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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