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13 is up. Way to go Billy!
Campbell
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Way to go indeed! I'm enjoying the book to the max!!
Both Chapter 12 & 13 are PL OK
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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14 is up. Masters is going to be caught some day...
Campbell
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I hope he will and receive a severe punishment.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑September 14th, 2019, 4:10 pm 14 is up. Masters is going to be caught some day...
Actually, I'd like you to double-check the following:
@02m:03.701s - "occult"
@04m:07.240s - "straightway"
Other than that, it's a flawless narration.
Thanks, SaraHale.
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Thanks! I fixed occult, but had a hard time figuring out what was wrong with straightway. Could you please elaborate for me?
Campbell
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15 is up.
Campbell
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I'll listen to Chapter 14 and 15 shortly. I'm not sure about "straightway" as I always hear it as "straightaway". I really don't know what to say about it so I asked you to double-check it. Sorry for the inconvenience.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑September 15th, 2019, 3:14 pm Thanks! I fixed occult, but had a hard time figuring out what was wrong with straightway. Could you please elaborate for me?
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hey Campbell,
Chapter 14 is PL OK
As for Chapter 15, there is a very minor PL note:
@08m:20.668 - "and went stiffly across the veranda." I hear "swiftly" instead of "stiffly"
Billy is amazing! I mean he knows everything. And his last line was like: I'll be the one who will find the treasure, not you.
Chapter 14 is PL OK
As for Chapter 15, there is a very minor PL note:
@08m:20.668 - "and went stiffly across the veranda." I hear "swiftly" instead of "stiffly"
Billy is amazing! I mean he knows everything. And his last line was like: I'll be the one who will find the treasure, not you.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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I had the same thought as you at first, but something didn't look right so I googled it. I just googled it again, turns out those are two separate words! What do you know? I will correct 14 when I can.
Campbell
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Does that mean there is a typo in the text? Please, don't forget to correct chapter 15 as well.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑September 16th, 2019, 8:18 amI had the same thought as you at first, but something didn't look right so I googled it. I just googled it again, turns out those are two separate words! What do you know? I will correct 14 when I can.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Thanks for the reminder. I read it wrong and thought you had only listened to 14 and had notes for that. Now I see it's 15 with the notes.
As for the typo, I don't think so. I just meant that there are two words, straightway and straightaway, and we both kind of assumed it was the second one, but I googled the pronunciation of the first and used it.
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Did my best to correct. Let me know what you think.SaraHale wrote: ↑September 16th, 2019, 5:37 am Hey Campbell,
Chapter 14 is PL OK
As for Chapter 15, there is a very minor PL note:
@08m:20.668 - "and went stiffly across the veranda." I hear "swiftly" instead of "stiffly"
Billy is amazing! I mean he knows everything. And his last line was like: I'll be the one who will find the treasure, not you.
Campbell
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Flawless editing!! Good job!lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑September 18th, 2019, 4:17 pm Did my best to correct. Let me know what you think.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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16 is up. I'm wondering where Masters is in all this... also, I saw that you shared a few videos. I haven't gotten a chance to watch them yet, that's why I haven't responded. But I'm trying to!
Campbell
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I'll listen to it either today or tomorrow. That's totally okay. Please take your time.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑September 22nd, 2019, 2:17 pm 16 is up. I'm wondering where Masters is in all this... also, I saw that you shared a few videos. I haven't gotten a chance to watch them yet, that's why I haven't responded. But I'm trying to!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.