{Complete} How To Tell a Story & other essays - lt

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 7th, 2019, 7:10 pm

sect 5
PL notes: two word changes
10:39 Perhaps we may venture two or three ''examples''...s/b samples
22:06 That is ''exactly'' what he did...s/b actually

johng · Post by **johng** » April 8th, 2019, 8:35 am

04 and 05 are corrected

johng · Post by **johng** » April 8th, 2019, 1:08 pm

06 and 07 are done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 9th, 2019, 2:52 pm

sect 4 & 5
spot PL OK

Poor Harriet.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 9th, 2019, 3:56 pm

sect 6
PL note: missing word
36:02 ended ; "but" if it really is, (missing word)

johng · Post by **johng** » April 10th, 2019, 8:51 am

06 is corrected

johng · Post by **johng** » April 10th, 2019, 12:28 pm

08 is done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 10th, 2019, 3:25 pm

sect 6
spot PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 11th, 2019, 3:53 pm

sect 7
PL note: Please check this sentence (mix up of wording)
05:09 One was the smartness "of the stranger in taking" in its hero, Jim Smiley, with a loaded frog; and the other was
the stranger's deep knowledge of a frog's nature

27:43 I not am but a stranger here, I no have not a frog (missing line)

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 11th, 2019, 4:28 pm

sect 8
PL note: word change

11:25 I spent a Sunday at ''Irving''...s/b Irvington

johng · Post by **johng** » April 13th, 2019, 9:08 am

7 and 8 corrected

A fascinating change of words (AND meaning) in "Frog" with the reference to the "hero" and Smiley...

check out:
https://archive.org/details/howtotellastory00twairich/page/n159
p. 151 at the bottom (takes a while to load)

I have been using this one occasionally...

SOMEONE changed the phrasing AND meaning!!!

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 13th, 2019, 3:31 pm

sect 7 & 8
spot PL OK

Love the story!

johng · Post by **johng** » April 16th, 2019, 11:08 am

09 is done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » April 17th, 2019, 5:49 pm

sect 9
PL note: missing word + word corrections
05:54 France knows nothing ''valuable'' about railroading...(missing word)
13:35 Californians by ''conscious'' absorption, and...s/b unconscious
22:38 They throw ''together'' too much light...s/b altogether
53:12 I had never heard it sound ''before'';...s/b better

johng · Post by **johng** » April 18th, 2019, 9:25 am

09 is corrected!