COMPLETE [solo] The Secret Tomb by Maurice le Blanc - kiki

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lymiewithpurpose
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SaraHale wrote: May 1st, 2019, 9:38 pm So, you haven't read the book before? Lately, I have to read and be familiar with the book or section before I claim it.
I don't think I have the focus for it :lol:. If it's for a group I kind of skim over it first before claiming. For solos, I don't read it beforehand :oops:. Rather a surprise then!
SaraHale wrote: May 1st, 2019, 9:38 pm BUT I noticed something, and I don't remember it was there before.
:hmm: I didn't hear it, but I re did that line anyways. Is it better now?

Thanks!
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lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 2nd, 2019, 3:06 pm I don't think I have the focus for it :lol:. If it's for a group I kind of skim over it first before claiming. For solos, I don't read it beforehand :oops:. Rather a surprise then!
I see. For me, I need to make sure that I can pronounce the author and character's name correctly. I had a hard time with that when I recorded a section for History of Egypt. :lol:
lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 2nd, 2019, 3:06 pm :hmm: I didn't hear it, but I re did that line anyways. Is it better now?

Thanks!
Thanks so much! It's so much better now. Chapter 8 is PL OK. :clap:
Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Constructive criticism is always welcome. :thumbs:
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SaraHale wrote: May 3rd, 2019, 9:37 am For me, I need to make sure that I can pronounce the author and character's name correctly.
Gotcha. I tend to make up my own pronunciation for those :oops:. Anyways, next chapter is up, and full of action!
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lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 4th, 2019, 8:54 pm Gotcha. I tend to make up my own pronunciation for those :oops:. Anyways, next chapter is up, and full of action!
Hey Campbell,

Chapter 9 is PL OK. Well done! :clap:
Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Constructive criticism is always welcome. :thumbs:
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SaraHale wrote: May 5th, 2019, 9:08 am
lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 4th, 2019, 8:54 pm Gotcha. I tend to make up my own pronunciation for those :oops:. Anyways, next chapter is up, and full of action!
Hey Campbell,

Chapter 9 is PL OK. Well done! :clap:
Thanks! Excited to see where the next chapter leads! Things are getting excited and we’re only halfway through!
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Chapter 10 is up.
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Hey Campbell,

I'm surprised that there are people looking for the treasure as well. That's interesting. Do you think there will be a treasure? :hmm:

Here are my PL Notes:
@24:04.0
Both of them opened their mouths,
I hear "uttered" instead of "opened".

@28:04.0
I hear "section" instead of "chapter".
Thanks, SaraHale. :D
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SaraHale wrote: May 12th, 2019, 8:05 am I'm surprised that there are people looking for the treasure as well. That's interesting. Do you think there will be a treasure?
I have no idea. I'm still waiting for the tomb to come up. It is called 'The Secret Tomb' after all. I have no idea how I'm going to write a summary at the end, it's such a crazy plot line.

I fixed these edits. Heads up, I'm going to try to pick up my pace a little bit. May not happen, but hoping to finish before June (I have a summer job that takes up an insane amount of time). We'll see.
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lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 12th, 2019, 12:33 pm I have no idea. I'm still waiting for the tomb to come up. It is called 'The Secret Tomb' after all. I have no idea how I'm going to write a summary at the end, it's such a crazy plot line.

I fixed these edits. Heads up, I'm going to try to pick up my pace a little bit. May not happen, but hoping to finish before June (I have a summer job that takes up an insane amount of time). We'll see.
Maybe the treasure is inside the secret tomb.

Thanks! Chapter 10 is PL OK. :clap: Got it! :thumbs:
Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Constructive criticism is always welcome. :thumbs:
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So much for picking my pace up. 11 is up, and we're getting into the tomb
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lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 16th, 2019, 5:26 pm So much for picking my pace up. 11 is up, and we're getting into the tomb
YAY!! :mrgreen:

Well, I'll try to PL it today. If I can't, will do tomorrow. I just found out that I have to PL 14 sections (thankfully, most of them are short sections).
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SaraHale wrote: May 17th, 2019, 6:34 am I just found out that I have to PL 14 sections
:shock: Good luck
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Hey Campbell,

What a chapter!! I never thought it will end like this. Brilliant narration as always.

I have minor PL Notes: You can ignore them if you want.

@5:03
scattered members brought together.
I hear "us" after brought.


@8:30.5
but he did not speak French
Missed "French"

@12:37.5
since it only consists of a sealed letter
I hear "leather" instead of "letter"

If I'm wrong, I apologize.

@19:21.5
This gentleman was mad.
I hear "the" instead of "this"

I can mark the recording PL OK if you would like. Just let me know. :D
Thanks, SaraHale. :D
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I'll fix them at some point today. Some of those look confusing to listeners :wink:
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lymiewithpurpose wrote: May 18th, 2019, 8:20 am I'll fix them at some point today. Some of those look confusing to listeners :wink:
Thank you, Campbell, for being kind. Chapter 11 is "see PL Notes".

Talk to you very soon! :D
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