COMPLETE SOLO Living With Our Children by Clara D. Pierson-mas

lymiewithpurpose · February 12th, 2019, 8:31 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 12th, 2019, 4:19 pm Uploaded chapters 11 and 12.

Chapter 11 is PL OK

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Only a few minor notes for Chapter 12:
The beginning silence is a bit long
3:34 - heard 'bruild' instead of 'build' (very minor, only mentioning it because there are other notes, you can choose if you want to fix it

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SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 13th, 2019, 1:22 pm

Chapter 12 fixed up and chapter 13 uploaded. Hope I didn't accidentally make up any more new words.

lymiewithpurpose · February 13th, 2019, 5:26 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 13th, 2019, 1:22 pm Chapter 12 fixed up and chapter 13 uploaded. Hope I didn't accidentally make up any more new words.

Chapter 12 is PL OK. I liked your new word. It reminds me of the differences between 'boil' and 'broil', maybe 'bruild' can have some special meaning.

Chapter 13 notes (no new words here

):
5:58 - heard 'handling', text says 'handing'
6:03 - heard 'step', text says 'set'
6:46 - heard 'defense', text says 'deference'

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 14th, 2019, 2:34 pm

Chapter 13 is ready to be checked and chapter 14 has been uploaded.

lymiewithpurpose · February 14th, 2019, 5:22 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 14th, 2019, 2:34 pm Chapter 13 is ready to be checked and chapter 14 has been uploaded.

Both are PL OK

!

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 15th, 2019, 12:25 pm

Chapter 15 uploaded and ready for listening.

lymiewithpurpose · February 15th, 2019, 2:50 pm

Really enjoyed this chapter! Reminded me of when I always would try to make my mom push out my bedtime

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Here are my notes:
1:40 - heard "or", text says "so"
5:43 - extra 'the'
8:37 - heard 'then it is the same', text says 'then is the time'
10:15 - heard 'abscess', text says 'abess'

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 17th, 2019, 1:57 pm

Corrections made to Chapter 15. Uploaded chapters 16 and 17. We are half way done!

lymiewithpurpose · February 17th, 2019, 5:00 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 17th, 2019, 1:57 pm Corrections made to Chapter 15. Uploaded chapters 16 and 17. We are half way done!

All of these are PL OK

! Nice work! Moving so fast!

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 21st, 2019, 3:03 pm

Uploaded chapters 18 and 19.

lymiewithpurpose · February 21st, 2019, 9:25 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 21st, 2019, 3:03 pm Uploaded chapters 18 and 19.

Both are great!

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 23rd, 2019, 8:07 pm

Chapter 20 uploaded and ready for listening

lymiewithpurpose · February 23rd, 2019, 9:23 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 23rd, 2019, 8:07 pm Chapter 20 uploaded and ready for listening

All good too

.

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » February 25th, 2019, 7:44 pm

Chapter 21 ready for listening.

lymiewithpurpose · February 25th, 2019, 9:29 pm

SweetHome wrote: ↑February 25th, 2019, 7:44 pm Chapter 21 ready for listening.

Sounded great!