COMPLETE SOLO Living With Our Children by Clara D. Pierson-mas

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Post by SweetHome » February 8th, 2019, 4:41 pm

Great comments. I appreciate it - that level of correcting is great. I will work on fixing them, but probably won't get to it until after the weekend.

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 8th, 2019, 6:15 pm

SweetHome wrote:
February 8th, 2019, 4:41 pm
Great comments. I appreciate it - that level of correcting is great. I will work on fixing them, but probably won't get to it until after the weekend.
No problem! I have plenty to listen to in the meantime. I'll keep on giving feedback, but don't feel pressured to get to them quickly. Whenever is totally fine.

Chapter 2 is almost there, only comment is that the ending silence is a bit long. Maybe cut it down a few seconds? :D Sounded great otherwise!
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Post by SweetHome » February 8th, 2019, 6:48 pm

I ended up finding a bit of time this evening. I've made those changes to the preface and first 2 chapters you mentioned. I also made the decibels a bit more consistent for all the chapters I've uploaded so far. Thank you for your keen listening!

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 8th, 2019, 7:51 pm

SweetHome wrote:
February 8th, 2019, 6:48 pm
I ended up finding a bit of time this evening. I've made those changes to the preface and first 2 chapters you mentioned. I also made the decibels a bit more consistent for all the chapters I've uploaded so far. Thank you for your keen listening!
Great! All fixed now! And the decibels are almost identical :D. Hope to get to more soon!
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 8th, 2019, 9:25 pm

Chapter 3 notes:

4:29 - missing word 'to'

I'm enjoying this more than I expected! It amuses me in a strange way! Can't wait to listen to more!
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 8th, 2019, 9:57 pm

Chapter 4 has a few more notes than the previous ones:

2:32 - missing word 'how'
3:50 - missing words 'so long as they are always kind jokes'
4:20 - added word 'of'

Can't wait to listen more tomorrow! :D
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 9th, 2019, 10:41 am

Chapter 5 notes:

Beginning silence is a tad over 1 second, we ask for no more than 0.5-1 second of silence :D
0:48 - heard 'or', text says 'of'
0:59 - heard 'we may decide to go on', text says 'we decide and go on'
1:32 - heard 'particularly', text says 'peculiarly'

Loving it! Looking forwards to hearing the 'Embarrassing Questions' section :lol:
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 9th, 2019, 12:23 pm

Chapter 6 is PL OK :clap:
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 9th, 2019, 5:21 pm

Chapter 7 notes:

1:52 - heard 'canjoled', text says 'cajoled'
4:25 - heard 'thing', text says 'things'
7:14 - missing word 'same'
10:18 - missing text 'want to ask questions'

This chapter was not at all what I expected :lol:
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 9th, 2019, 5:56 pm

Chapter 8 notes:

Beginning silence on the edge of being too long, may want to cut it down a half second or so
3:47 - heard 'amiable', text says 'amenable'
6:15 - missing word 'with'
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 9th, 2019, 8:17 pm

Chapter 9 notes:

1:46 - heard 'appointment', text says 'apportionment'
3:17 - heard 'onset', text says 'outset'
3:38 - heard 'earned', text says 'other'
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 10th, 2019, 12:25 pm

Chapter 10 notes:

6:21 - heard 'tranquillity', text says 'tranquilly'

Got through all that's been recorded! I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for more (no pressure though, just record when you can, doesn't have to get done quickly :D).
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Post by SweetHome » February 11th, 2019, 2:32 pm

Alright! I got though the corrections of chapters 3-5 and 7-10 and they are all uploaded. Wonderful catches – thank you. My goodness, I missed chunks of sentences sometimes! Yay! The sentence in chapter 10 now makes 100% more sense.

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 11th, 2019, 2:55 pm

SweetHome wrote:
February 11th, 2019, 2:32 pm
The sentence in chapter 10 now makes 100% more sense.
Ha ha I hate when that happens to me! I go around talking about how bad of a writer the author is and then realize it's me who can't read it!

They are all PL OK now :clap:!
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Post by SweetHome » February 12th, 2019, 4:19 pm

Uploaded chapters 11 and 12.

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