[COMPLETE][SOLO]The King in Yellow by Robert W. Chambers - kit
Hello!
I have section 9 finished and ready for PL. Let me know what needs fixed for that one. I'm hoping to have more done by middle of next week. Thanks again so much for the French soundbites they help tremendously!
Section 9
Length: 15:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_09_chambers_128kb.mp3
Eva
I have section 9 finished and ready for PL. Let me know what needs fixed for that one. I'm hoping to have more done by middle of next week. Thanks again so much for the French soundbites they help tremendously!
Section 9
Length: 15:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_09_chambers_128kb.mp3
Eva
ah a new section, wonderful. What a tragic ending. I'm a bit confused though, if Sylvia was already dead, who was it that moved and opened the door ? And I'm happy that nothing happened to the cat, I feared it was one of those stories where the cat died
There is only one tiny little cut to make:
> at 11:16: repetition: "he said to me" – can be cut once
The rest is fine. Thanks and have a nice weekend.
Sonia
the reading is excellent and your French was definitely improved glad I could help.I have section 9 finished and ready for PL. Let me know what needs fixed for that one. Thanks again so much for the French soundbites they help tremendously!
There is only one tiny little cut to make:
> at 11:16: repetition: "he said to me" – can be cut once
The rest is fine. Thanks and have a nice weekend.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Totally agree with the ending, it was really creepy....
Here's the edited sections
Section 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_09_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length:15: 17
Section 12
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_12_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 31:44
I hope you're staying safe out there!
Eva
Here's the edited sections
Section 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_09_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length:15: 17
Section 12
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_12_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 31:44
I hope you're staying safe out there!
Eva
thank you, Eva, and good to hear from you again. Here all is fine with me, just the whole situation is a bit depressing, but I'm not ill.Shalott wrote: ↑March 24th, 2020, 12:22 pm Here's the edited sections
Section 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_09_chambers_128kb.mp3
Section 12
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_12_chambers_128kb.mp3
Both sections now PL ok Hope you are ok too
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Hello!
I hope you are doing well! I have the first section of the street of the lady of our fields done. It probably has some pronunciation issues (specifically with the french woman's accented English and the French at the beginning ) any help there would be much appreciated. I have section 7 done, I just need to edit it. I'm hoping to get to it in the next couple of days.
Section 13
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_13_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length 14:47
Hope you are doing well!
Eva
I hope you are doing well! I have the first section of the street of the lady of our fields done. It probably has some pronunciation issues (specifically with the french woman's accented English and the French at the beginning ) any help there would be much appreciated. I have section 7 done, I just need to edit it. I'm hoping to get to it in the next couple of days.
Section 13
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_13_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length 14:47
Hope you are doing well!
Eva
yay a new section
thanks, and here all is well, I hope the whole crisis will soon turn back to normal free life though.
Sonia
no it's actually quite fine. The old lady must have a strange accent, so I think you did it quite well, considering I think this time we need not change anything. I'll mark it PL ok. ("Why Susie !" was making me giggle )It probably has some pronunciation issues (specifically with the french woman's accented English and the French at the beginning ) any help there would be much appreciated.
thanks, and here all is well, I hope the whole crisis will soon turn back to normal free life though.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Hey!
I hope all is well. I finished section 7, let me know what I need to fix.
Section 7
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_07_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 35:18
Thanks,
Eva
I hope all is well. I finished section 7, let me know what I need to fix.
Section 7
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_07_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 35:18
Thanks,
Eva
oh I loved this story. Quite romantic, but still with a gothic touch over it all. Especially the ending with the tombstone is quite chilling, even though one expects it all throughout. Lovely !
Perfect reading and the French wasn't too bad. I think we need no corrections there.
Just one tiny error with the end disclaimer:
> at 35:11: "End of Section 7" – you say "Part" 7
I feel very picky now
Thanks, and have a nice week still !
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Hello! I have the last section edited and section 14 ready for pl as well!
Section 7
length 35:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_07_chambers_128kb.mp3
Section 14
Length 44:07
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_14_chambers_128kb.mp3
Hope you're still doing ok!
Eva
Section 7
length 35:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_07_chambers_128kb.mp3
Section 14
Length 44:07
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_14_chambers_128kb.mp3
Hope you're still doing ok!
Eva
ah a new instalment thanks, Eva, wonderful reading again. Section 7 is now PL ok.Shalott wrote: ↑July 20th, 2020, 12:00 pmHello! I have the last section edited and section 14 ready for pl as well!
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_07_chambers_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_14_chambers_128kb.mp3
For Section 14 I have a few small notes, nothing difficult though:
> at 26:28: repeat: "Nothing, protested Clifford" – one version can be cut
> at 29:35: missed part (underlined) : "Now, where in the name of all that's reasonable could he have gone!" muttered Clifford, looking down the street.
> at 31:50: repeat: "and then" – can be cut once
Looking forward to the rest of the story. Can anybody be so naive But maybe Hastings knows all along but doesn't want to deal with it.
All good here, thanks. With you as well hopefully. Summer holidays starting tomorrow afternoon.
see you for the next part...
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Hello!
I hope you're still doing well!
I have section 14 all edited
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_14_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 44:04
and I have section 15 as well!
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_15_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 26:47
Let me know what needs to fixed! I can't believe that this is almost done
Thanks!
Eva
I hope you're still doing well!
I have section 14 all edited
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_14_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 44:04
and I have section 15 as well!
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_15_chambers_128kb.mp3
Length: 26:47
Let me know what needs to fixed! I can't believe that this is almost done
Thanks!
Eva
thank you Eva, Section 14 is now PL ok Yes, only 2 sections left and then this project can get catalogued. Proves again that slowly but steadily one can reach any goal.Shalott wrote: ↑August 17th, 2020, 7:02 pmhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_14_chambers_128kb.mp3
and I have section 15 as well!
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_15_chambers_128kb.mp3
Let me know what needs to fixed! I can't believe that this is almost done
I started PLing Section 15 now, and the beginning was pretty good but then suddenly, from 9 minutes in (in fact from the beginning of Chapter 6) a lot of repeats and stumbles are left in I started making notes, but after half an hour to get through barely 5 minutes of text, I stopped. I think maybe you uploaded the unedited file by mistake, because in my experience, it's unusual you leave so many errors in.
Here are my initial notes, but at 13 minutes in I stopped and thought it more time-efficient to ask you first to upload the correct file
> I also noticed that the noise is quite high, another hint that it may be the unedited file
here all the repeats that occur in a few minutes only:
> 9.21: chapter number "six"
> 9.37: the clatter of workmen's sabots
> 10.34: and then came battering at the lodge gate during hours which even a gendarme
> 10.51: and took an ostentatious draught
> 11.18: Hastings hesitated for an instant
> 11.55: and did not appear
> 11.59: good evening
> 13.18: "Ole chap," he observed, "do you want
Will PL the file after you confirm the correct upload
and here all is fine so far, a bit depressed still because of the restrictions, but I try to cope. Hope you are doing well too.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Hey!
I'm so sorry about that last file I'm not quite sure what happened, but here should be the correct file
Section 15
Length:24:35
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_15_chambers_128kb.mp3
I'm doing pretty good. A little stir crazy and stuff, but good.
Eva
I'm so sorry about that last file I'm not quite sure what happened, but here should be the correct file
Section 15
Length:24:35
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_15_chambers_128kb.mp3
I'm doing pretty good. A little stir crazy and stuff, but good.
Eva
super, now this was a flawless run-through Totally PL ok. And I am pleased it had a sort of happy-ending for both, even though it's still an open ending.Shalott wrote: ↑August 31st, 2020, 8:40 amI'm so sorry about that last file I'm not quite sure what happened, but here should be the correct file
Section 15
Length:24:35
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/kinginyellow_15_chambers_128kb.mp3
I guess what happened was you pasted the unedited chapter 6 into the file. Chapter 5 was all good already before.
Well...all is good now One final section left to go So close !
Have a nice day still
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
everything ok with you, Eva, haven't heard from you in a while Hope all is well.
Please let me know a short update whenever you find time. Only one section to go, so cool
Sonia
Please let me know a short update whenever you find time. Only one section to go, so cool
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.