[Complete] The Fall River Tragedy by Edwin H. Porter - lt

Post by **Lynnet** » January 15th, 2019, 2:17 am

Back in the saddle! Chapter 21 is ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » January 15th, 2019, 10:47 am

I hope you had a lovely visit.

Section 21 is PL OK.

Post by **Lynnet** » January 16th, 2019, 11:00 am

Thank you, yes... it was loooong and exhausting, but all the family came at different times.

Talking of long, chapter 22 is in the MW!

linny · Post by **linny** » January 18th, 2019, 8:43 am

Lynne,
Very impressive work!

22-24 are all PL OK.

Post by **Lynnet** » January 30th, 2019, 12:16 pm

Chapter 25 is ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 1st, 2019, 4:38 pm

Sections 25-28 are all PL OK.

Section 29 has a small repeat
19:08 repeat (first is an error) - …when I was going there I say Mr. Cunningham, Bolles and one or two others; I went into the yard

I wonder what happened to day six.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 2nd, 2019, 3:16 pm

29 is spot check pl ok

30 has a couple of stumbles
3:16 - had directed it before
8:43 - the district attorney

linny · Post by **linny** » February 3rd, 2019, 8:31 pm

30 is spot check pl ok.

Post by **Lynnet** » February 5th, 2019, 9:20 am

Section 31 is ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 5th, 2019, 2:42 pm

Section 31:
50:22 – stumble/repeat – because of the waywardness of his boy

linny · Post by **linny** » February 5th, 2019, 3:43 pm

Section 32 is PL OK. Did you know before you started there were so many long sections? You've done a great job!

Other than repeating himself a lot, he made a really nice defense argument.

Section 31 is spot check PL OK

Post by **Lynnet** » February 5th, 2019, 4:35 pm

linny wrote: ↑February 5th, 2019, 3:43 pm Section 32 is PL OK. Did you know before you started there were so many long sections? You've done a great job!

Other than repeating himself a lot, he made a really nice defense argument.

Section 31 is spot check PL OK

No, I didn't... in fact, it was only as I was approaching the 3 hour mark on chapter 30, and I was making a lot of errors and was getting hoarse (and my dear hubby appeared with a cup of tea, saying 'you need a break') that I realized just how long it was

Chapter 31 isn't as long (only about 1hr 45 unedited) and the last one a measly 27 minutes!! I'll try an get some more editing done tomorrow so we can get her off the hook (yes, he persuaded me she didn't do it!) Would be interesting to see what CSI: Fall River would make of it

Post by **Lynnet** » February 6th, 2019, 2:20 pm

Section 33 is ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 9th, 2019, 12:42 pm

Section 33

42:12 - My distinguished friend has admitted so many things that I am saved the necessity of arguing very much about the circumstances surrounding the house.
Missing the final h. It caught my ear but you can probably skip it if you want to.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 9th, 2019, 2:43 pm

34 and 35 are both PL OK.

This was a great text pick and you did a wonderful job with it.