[COMPLETE] Bunker Bean by Harry Leon Wilson

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Hi Joseph,
PL note: your volume needs to be increased,
it is slightly low at 85.7 db,
this falls outside of the target range (86–92 dB).  

It's an easy fix in Audacity.
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5/4/66 (S.V.) Malone, Jimmy M.
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Thankyou! Very good.
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bumped up the amplification a little (with slight clipping) and it passed the checker and ......reuploaded.
Thanks!

Chapter One fixed. thanks for the PL.
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Chapter Two uploaded....I don't know that a I will continue at this 'speed' .....but we'll see. :>) (no hurry on others involved)

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/bunkerbean_02_wilson_128kb.mp3 23:45
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sect 1
spot PL OK :thumbs:



Great job! :clap:

Hi Joseph,

As the reader you set the pace for what is comfortable for you. :D
Helen

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sect 2
PL note: please remove a repeated line

16:30 his leisure was never seriously menaced.
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Section 2 line removed and added some amplification to pass Checker....thanks!!

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/bunkerbean_02_wilson_128kb.mp3 23:42
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Hi Joe,
sect 3
PL notes: just editing of repeated lines

7:48 Go on, lamp her once!" (repeated)
8:20 "Not half bad, that!" (repeated)
12:39 At last came the street down which he (corrected/repeated line)
21:12 Fresh from Unparalleled

*Note:
Just a reminder, when you place the corrected sect into the MW, change the status to: ready for spot PL. :D
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sect 2
Spot PL OK

1-Excellent editing :thumbs:

2- excellent reading voice, clear and strong. :clap:
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Section 3 ready for Spot PL.... thankyou my furthering education on the Magic Window :>)
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sect 4
PL note: please remove a repeated/corrected line
22:30 what he felt could justly could be felt
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Hi Joe,
Great editing job!

sect 3
spot PL OK :thumbs:
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Thankyou! Section 4 ready for Spot PL

And chapter 5 uploaded....
https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/bunkerbean_05_wilson_128kb.mp3 28:45
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sect 4

spot PL OK :thumbs:
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