(SOLO) Mark Twain, a Biography by Albert Bigelow Paine (1861 - 1937)- Volume II, Part 1: 1875-1886 , Part 2: 1886-1900

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 3rd, 2018, 5:50 pm

sect 52
PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 3rd, 2018, 5:51 pm

sect 53
PL note: missing word

6:10 who never told "them" a lie

johng · Post by **johng** » October 4th, 2018, 6:19 am

58 is done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 4th, 2018, 9:55 pm

sect 54
PL note: Please check these 2 words for me.

2:20 Your books the precious "draught" betray.. Please check, I hear "draft"

6:38 Charles Dudley Warner is charmed with the "poem"..Please check, I hear "poet"

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 4th, 2018, 10:10 pm

sect 55

PL note: please check a word.

7:35 “I know you do great "work"..., I hear "things"

johng · Post by **johng** » October 5th, 2018, 8:42 am

53 corrected

54 "draught" is correct pronunciation...other correction made

55
corrected

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 5th, 2018, 5:06 pm

sect 53, 54, & 55

spot PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 5th, 2018, 5:22 pm

sect 56

PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 5th, 2018, 5:46 pm

sect 57

PL notes:

4:01 English as "She Is Taught"... I hear as "She Taught it"

8:39 he got very "much" interested in the game, (Please check for a missing word.)

johng · Post by **johng** » October 6th, 2018, 11:33 am

HZFerr wrote: ↑October 5th, 2018, 5:46 pm sect 57

PL notes:

4:01 English as "She Is Taught"... I hear as "She Taught it"

8:39 he got very "much" interested in the game, (Please check for a missing word.)

57 corrected

johng · Post by **johng** » October 7th, 2018, 9:11 am

59 and 60 are done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 7th, 2018, 6:48 pm

sect 57

spot PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 7th, 2018, 7:10 pm

sect 58

PL notes: word change

6:33 picture in memory & "imagination" call for ...I hear "imagine"

johng · Post by **johng** » October 8th, 2018, 11:32 am

HZFerr wrote: ↑October 7th, 2018, 7:10 pm sect 58

PL notes: word change

6:33 picture in memory & "imagination" call for ...I hear "imagine"

58 corrected
and 61 is done (note change from quoted material to narrative voice in one place)

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 8th, 2018, 3:09 pm

sect 58
spot PL OK