[COMPLETE] Poems by Mary Coleridge - icequeen

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Post by pnagami » June 6th, 2018, 11:17 am

Hi Erin,

Sections 76-86, and 88 are PL OK.

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Pam
"Quiet minds cannot be perplexed or frightened but go on in fortune or misfortune at their own private pace, like a clock during a thunderstorm."

Robert Louis Stevenson

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Post by pnagami » June 9th, 2018, 8:50 pm

Hi Erin,

Got sidetracked and then spaced out on this today. But I will listen tomorrow.

Pam
"Quiet minds cannot be perplexed or frightened but go on in fortune or misfortune at their own private pace, like a clock during a thunderstorm."

Robert Louis Stevenson

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Post by Newgatenovelist » June 10th, 2018, 1:06 am

You're a PLing machine, so I'm happy that you also know how to get sidetracked and be spaced out every now and then. Carry on with other stuff, and come back at your leisure!

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Post by pnagami » June 10th, 2018, 6:55 am

Hi Erin,

Sections 89-99 and 101 are PL OK.

My best,

Pam
"Quiet minds cannot be perplexed or frightened but go on in fortune or misfortune at their own private pace, like a clock during a thunderstorm."

Robert Louis Stevenson

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Post by Newgatenovelist » June 11th, 2018, 7:19 am

Hi Pam,

Back at it again today. Some interesting ones about technological changes - I don't think I would have written of trains or lights like that!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/poems_087_coleridge_128kb.mp3 0.57, p. 89

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/poems_100_coleridge_128kb.mp3 1.10, p. 103

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/poems_102_coleridge_128kb.mp3 1.22
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/poems_103_coleridge_128kb.mp3 1.08


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Post by pnagami » June 11th, 2018, 8:02 am

Hi Erin,

Sections 87, 100, 102-105, 108 are PL OK.

Section 106: at the beginning I hear "On an alien ground" for "On alien ground".

My best,

Pam
"Quiet minds cannot be perplexed or frightened but go on in fortune or misfortune at their own private pace, like a clock during a thunderstorm."

Robert Louis Stevenson

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Post by Newgatenovelist » June 11th, 2018, 8:20 am

Arrrgh, I clearly wasn't paying attention. Sorry about that, but thanks for catching it!

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Post by pnagami » June 11th, 2018, 8:41 am

My pleasure!

Pam
"Quiet minds cannot be perplexed or frightened but go on in fortune or misfortune at their own private pace, like a clock during a thunderstorm."

Robert Louis Stevenson


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Post by pnagami » June 12th, 2018, 9:44 am

Hi Erin,

Sections 106, 107, 109, and 112 are PL OK.

Section 110: Title I hear "not upon my breast" instead of "not upon thy breast"

The butterflies "tiny beasts"!

Pam
"Quiet minds cannot be perplexed or frightened but go on in fortune or misfortune at their own private pace, like a clock during a thunderstorm."

Robert Louis Stevenson

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Post by Newgatenovelist » June 12th, 2018, 12:19 pm

Ye gods, I'm really not covering myself with glory lately. Sorry to have all these silly little things for you to catch, but I'll get the intro fixed.

Yeah, I never thought of butterflies as 'tiny beasts' before either! I only wish I could be that original in my own writing!

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