Complete The RadioBoys on the Mexican Border by Gerald Breckenridge - LT

hugachris · Post by **hugachris** » June 10th, 2018, 1:18 pm

I edited it anyway...lol It was kinda bugging me that I had done that and your post was simply confirmation that I shouldn't be lazy when it comes to the wording! Thanks Tom! I put in the new link with the corrected upload.

Chris

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » June 10th, 2018, 1:25 pm

My opinion is that there will be other dialog later that will cement the relationship the author intended and so it doesn't matter here. I probably wouldn't have brought it up if I had thought it through. But this is a good time for you to tell me if you want that sort of detail in my PL reports. Almost no one does, and I tell people who PL for me that I'm only interested in diversions that substantially change the meaning of the text.

Edit: Our posts were almost simultaneous, so I didn't see that you had already fixed it. Thank you.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » June 10th, 2018, 1:43 pm

Chapter 2 is PL OK! Again!

I'm quite enjoying the voices you are using for the various characters. Thank you!

hugachris · Post by **hugachris** » June 10th, 2018, 2:07 pm

I'm really not picky and pretty easy going, so I'll take any suggestions you'd like to give me if you think they'll help the story! Thank you about the voices! I hope they are ok!

Chris

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » June 12th, 2018, 11:41 am

Chapter 3 is PL OK!

Nicely done.

FYI, I am going to disappear for about 2 weeks. You are welcome to continue recording and posting additional chapters, I just won't be able to PL them until July.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » June 30th, 2018, 6:10 pm

OK, I'm back. I will start in on my PL duties in the next day or two as I get caught up. Thank you for your patience. I'm looking forward to hearing the installments you have completed.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 1st, 2018, 12:40 pm

Section 04 PL OK!
Section 06 PL OK!
Section 07 PL OK!
Section 08 PL OK!
Section 09 PL OK!
Section 10 PL OK!

Excellent reading!

Section 05:1 item for your attention:
05:03 I heard "ivory-covered church" and expected "ivy-covered church". Rather a different mental image.

hugachris · Post by **hugachris** » July 2nd, 2018, 9:56 am

Oh my goodness! lol That does indeed give a different mental image. Sheesh, how many elephants would have perished to make an ivory covered church?? I have corrected it and the corrected link should now be in the MW!

thanks!!

Chris

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 2nd, 2018, 1:55 pm

Section 05 is PL OK!

Flawless patch! Thank you.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 3rd, 2018, 11:04 am

chapter 11 is PL OK!
chapter 12 is PL OK!
chapter 13 is PL OK!

This story reminds me a lot of the Hardy Boys series. You are reading it beautifully.

hugachris · Post by **hugachris** » July 3rd, 2018, 4:27 pm

yes! It reminds me of the Hardy Boys too! I think that is partially what drew me to it! And thank you very much!!

Chris

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 7th, 2018, 10:39 am

Chapter 14 is PL OK!
Chapter 15 is PL OK!

Well done. Thank you.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 10th, 2018, 11:40 am

Chapter 16 is PL OK!

Thank you! I'm sorely tempted to read ahead but am restraining myself.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 11th, 2018, 8:20 am

Chapter 17 is PL OK!

Getting tense!

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 11th, 2018, 5:44 pm

Chapter 18 is PL OK!