COMPLETE The Texan Star by Joseph Altsheler-mas

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linny
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I took a look at 3 and 4. I strongly suggest working out the technical aspects from 1 before you continue on. Both of these chapters are still showing the DC offset. Both should be noise cleaned and please double check your opening and ending silences. On 3 your opening silence is almost 2 seconds and ending is 6 seconds. On 4 opening is fine but ending is 9 seconds.
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linny wrote: February 27th, 2018, 5:45 am Since it's 4 seconds I would say it's ok but do try to get closer to 5 in the future. If it was 3.5 I'd say it should be corrected but 4 should be pretty safe.

Alrighty, thank you.
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linny wrote: February 26th, 2018, 6:09 am PL notes for Chapter 1
0:27 distortion – They could see through the narrow window

11:22 small stumble on inhabitants (you should just be able to clip this out)

21:07 distortion – Their quarters were commodious
These corrections are still needed.
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Visually 3 and 4 look good. However you are processing now chapter 5 could use it as well.

Other than chapter 1, I'll leave the others for your DPL. I really just wanted to work through the technical with you. :thumbs:
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linny wrote: March 2nd, 2018, 7:01 am Visually 3 and 4 look good. However you are processing now chapter 5 could use it as well.

Other than chapter 1, I'll leave the others for your DPL. I really just wanted to work through the technical with you. :thumbs:
Oh, right. I forgot to do that to 1. Should have that done by tonight.
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3 and 4 are not PL OK. I didn't PL them, I just reviewed them for technical.
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Oh dang, I'm sorry. Let me revert that.

Here is Chapter 1...again... You might want to check out the 21:07 bit again, I couldn't fix it, so I just re-recorded it. I hope it is fine.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3
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Edmonds wrote: March 2nd, 2018, 11:44 am Oh dang, I'm sorry. Let me revert that.

Here is Chapter 1...again... You might want to check out the 21:07 bit again, I couldn't fix it, so I just re-recorded it. I hope it is fine.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3
The first two corrections are fine.
For this third correction you left in a click which sounds like your mic being turned off. You'll want to remove that.
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linny wrote: March 3rd, 2018, 8:36 am
Edmonds wrote: March 2nd, 2018, 11:44 am Oh dang, I'm sorry. Let me revert that.

Here is Chapter 1...again... You might want to check out the 21:07 bit again, I couldn't fix it, so I just re-recorded it. I hope it is fine.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3
The first two corrections are fine.
For this third correction you left in a click which sounds like your mic being turned off. You'll want to remove that.
I'LL GET IT RIGHT SOMETIME

Chapter 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3
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I'd be glad to DPL if you are still looking for one.


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Great aniroo. I'll add you to the MW.
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:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

THANK YOU SO MUCH, ANIROO. I hope you enjoy my reading.
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