[Solo]The Ring and the Book - An Interpretation - dlo

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Section 11 is PL OK.

Two notes for 13:

1.36-1.40, second line p. 203
"concerning those the day [heard days] killed or let live."

15.16-15.18, penultimate line p. 211
Thy [heard thine] rare gold ring of verse...
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Section 13 is spot PL OK.
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Hi Algy,

Just to let you know that I've downloaded your chapters, but I'll be a bit slow this week to PL.
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Ugh, still slow. But here goes - I'll PL Guido soon, but for now there's one note on section 14:

28.10-28.13, indented quotation p. 230, omission
But nobody cared [ask] to paint the same,
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Thanks Erin

Section 14 corrected and reuploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_14_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
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Section 14 is PL OK.

A couple of notes for 12:

2.18-2.25, indented quotation p. 175
How I could [heard could I] spill this overplus of mine
Among those hoar- [heard hoary-] haired, shrunk-shanked odds and ends

3.07-3.10, indented quotation p. 175, extra word
'Thus I am !'

13.44-13.48, mid-page p. 182, omission
...it is enough [for him] to say that he chose to hate her.

22.08-22.11, antepenultimate line p. 187
Away with the [heard that] empty stare!

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Section 12 is PL OK. Congrats!
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Thanks Erin

This project is ready to be catalogued.

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Algy & Erin

Thank you for sharing your time and talents.

This project is in the Librivox Catalog: https://librivox.org/the-ring-and-the-book-an-interpretation-by-francis-bickford-hornbrooke/

David O
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