[Solo]The Ring and the Book - An Interpretation - dlo

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » June 19th, 2018, 11:41 am

Notes for your consideration:

1.29-1.32, p. 79, second line, extra word
...and why should it [not] be surprised at the end?

8.32-8.37, indented quotation p. 83, extra word + inversion
…[and] it seemed to say for the first time
'But am not I [heard I not] the Bride...

11.37-11.39, p. 85, end of main paragraph
"proper for [heard to] us travellers."

21.03-21.05, first half p. 91
...left o' the very ledge [heard edge] of things,

22.08-22.10, bottom third p. 91
From what just [heard just what] is to absolute nothingness-

22.39-22.43, p. 92, fourth line of indented quotation, extra word
That mops and mows and makes as [if] it were love

44.22-44.26, p. 106 indented quotation
...would personate [heard impersonate] Saint George
For a mock Princess in undragoned days.

Erin

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » June 19th, 2018, 3:48 pm

Thanks Erin

Corrected file uploaded.
Duration now 44:57

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » June 20th, 2018, 1:53 am

Section 7 is spot PL OK.

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » July 8th, 2018, 6:14 pm

Here is Chapter 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_08_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:35

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » July 11th, 2018, 7:10 am

Hi Algy,

Two notes for 08:

29.58-30.00. P. 125, end of penultimate indented quotation, extra word
...not [to] go doomed
And done with...

33.47-33.50. P. 128, top half of main paragraph, repetition
...she was resi she was resigned to suffering and death.

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » July 11th, 2018, 7:25 am

Thanks Erin

Section 8 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_08_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:34

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » July 11th, 2018, 11:29 am

Section 08 is PL OK.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » July 16th, 2018, 9:12 am

A general notice: I'll be on the move at the very end of this month and the beginning of August. It's only for a few days, but thought I'd mention it. Carry on!

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » July 31st, 2018, 11:16 pm

Two more chapters for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_09_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
16:57

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_10_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
17:16

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » August 4th, 2018, 1:30 pm

Hi Algy,

Two notes apiece for 9 and 10.

Section 9

13.01-13.03, third line on p. 139
With sour-sweet [heard sweet-sour] sauce...

14.59-15.01, p. 140, third line of indented quotation, extra word
...of all [the] days i' the year...

Section 10

3.09-3.12, p. 143, top half of second indented quotation
...shall not she [heard she not] jar the hand
That buffets her?

9.40-9.43, top half p. 147
I have had just [heard just had] the pitifullest dream

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » August 4th, 2018, 6:36 pm

Thanks Erin

Sections 9 and 10 have been corrected and reuploaded.

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » August 4th, 2018, 11:50 pm

Chapters 9 and 10 are PL OK!

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » September 16th, 2018, 5:36 pm

Section 11 is up.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_11_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:39.

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · September 18th, 2018, 2:00 pm

Hi Algy,

A couple of notes for 11:

1.48-1.51, second and third lines of first indented quotation p. 153
Once [heard One] more appeal is made
From man's assize to mine...

21.23, first indented quotation p. 164, omission
…[and] an infant-heir to cheat?

22.06-22.08, bottom half p. 164
"where are the Christians in their panoply?"
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/panoply

22.21-22.24, first line of second indented quotation p. 164
Done at an instinct [heard instant] of the natural man.

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » September 18th, 2018, 6:16 pm

Section 11 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_11_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:42

Cheers