[COMPLETE] The Silver Bullet by Fergus Hume - kd

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Chapter 4 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 5 is ready for review.
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Chapter 5 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 6 is ready for review.
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Chapter 6 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 7 is ready for review.
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Chapter 7 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 8 is ready for review.
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Chapter 8 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 9 is ready for review.
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Chapter 9 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 10 is ready for review.
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Chapter 10 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 11 is ready for review.

I made a change in the opening paragraph on order to make it more understandable to a listener. Let me know is you think this is a problem.

Thanks
Richard
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Chapter 11 PL OK Marked so in MW

I noticed the change and think it is fine.

I noticed those 2 alphabet lines when I brought up the chapter and was quite curious to hear how you would read them successfully. I think your idea is the best. Reading them as printed would have confused listeners.
Max :)
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