[COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells

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Post by HollyJenson » September 30th, 2017, 8:12 am

I think 'fainting into utter unconsciousness' could be a useful life skill. :lol:

Chapter 13: At 10:45 it says, "You DID mean Mr. Carlton by the letter S." You said DIDN'T.

Other than that, everything was perfect. :clap:
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 1st, 2017, 6:54 am

Ah yes, 'fainting into utter unconsciousness' indeed. I like the concept. :D I wonder how I might learn to do that?

Marvelous and an all-important catch you made in this dialog. Thank you!!

Chapter 13 has been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot PL.

Thanks so much!! :thumbs:
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“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by Roger » October 3rd, 2017, 8:40 am

And now chapter 14 has been uploaded and posted.

Thanks! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by HollyJenson » October 5th, 2017, 8:04 pm

Chapter 13 is PL OK! :clap:

Chapter 14: At 11:40 the text says, "...but of course you're FEARFULLY upset." You said PERFECTLY.

That was all I could find. Everything else was perfect!
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 6th, 2017, 6:39 am

Excellent catch Holly! Me mouth doesn't always speak what me eyes have seen.

Chapter 14 has been patched and uploaded.

Thanks!! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by HollyJenson » October 6th, 2017, 7:37 pm

Chapter 14 is PL OK! :clap:

I do the same thing whether I'm reading or not reading. It would be interesting to have a proof-listener following me around all day to tell me when I say one thing but really mean something else! :lol:
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 10th, 2017, 9:21 am

Exactly! :D Matter of fact, I kind of like the idea of having a personal proof-listener. What an excellent idea! If only ....

Well, at any rate, chapter 15 has been posted, although I'm not too fond of how the reading came out. :roll:

Thanks!! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by Roger » October 11th, 2017, 9:49 am

And now, lucky you .... chapter 16 has been posted.
Things are certainly getting interesting. :hmm:

Thanks! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by HollyJenson » October 11th, 2017, 2:16 pm

I thought your reading of both chapters was excellent, as always! :D

So, I had to google "cachou," which apparently was sort of like an ancient Tic-Tac. :lol:

OK, here we go.

Chapter 15

At 6:07, the text says, "The time was too short for anything except a definitely PREMEDITATED act." You said "PREDETERMINED."

At 7:90, the text says, "...and might Mrs. Markam's suggestion have EVEN a foundation of probability." You said, "BEEN."

Chapter 16

At 2:41 the text says, "...for he foresaw that his story would be BUT brief." You said "CUT."

At 11:40 the text says, "...and DETAINING Harris." You said, "DETAILING."

That's it!
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 12th, 2017, 8:50 am

Good catches on both chapters! :thumbs:

I didn't know what a cachou was either. At first I figured it was a variant spelling of "cashew", which I suppose is natural, but I also had to look it up, as you did.
I know that around the 1950's and 60's, Sen-Sen was a common product for suppressing tobacco breath. (Yes, I'm guilty) Live and learn.

15 and 16 have both been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot PL at your convenience.

Thanks!! :D
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“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by HollyJenson » October 13th, 2017, 6:31 pm

Perfect fixes!

Chapters 15 and 16 are PL OK! :clap:
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 14th, 2017, 5:07 pm

Chapter 17 has been posted. Enjoy!

Thanks!! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by HollyJenson » October 14th, 2017, 10:37 pm

There's always some French minx who's everlastingly spying about in the hallways. So annoying. :lol:

Just one small mistake in Chapter 17:

At 11:33, the text reads: "...it had been bits of romantic music that Rob felt sure had been for Schuyler's DELECTATION more than his mother's." You said DECLARATION.

That's the only thing I could find!
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 15th, 2017, 8:29 am

Now that was a pretty silly error. Excellent catch! :thumbs:

17 has been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot check.
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

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Post by HollyJenson » October 15th, 2017, 9:12 pm

Perfect fix.

Chapter 17 is PL OK. :clap:

I agree wholeheartedly with Burt of Burt's Bees.
Holly

"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman

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