[COMPLETE](Français) Alice au Pays des Merveilles-L Carroll-kit

[Ealswythe]

Chapter 2 ready for PL https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_02_carroll_128kb.mp3

Duration 17:24


Good morning, Sonia!

[Kitty]

Chapter 2 ready for PL https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_02_carroll_128kb.mp3
Duration 17:24

good morning Linda and thanks for the next chapter. Very well read, yet again, and I only found one single pronunciation error:

> at 11:07: "elle entendit patauger dans la mare" - you say "patauguer", but it's a /j/ sound, like in "partager"

the rest is perfect

Sonia

[Ealswythe]

Chapter 2 ready for PL https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_02_carroll_128kb.mp3
Duration 17:24

good morning Linda and thanks for the next chapter. Very well read, yet again, and I only found one single pronunciation error:

> at 11:07: "elle entendit patauger dans la mare" - you say "patauguer", but it's a /j/ sound, like in "partager"

the rest is perfect

Sonia

Oh OK. I can change that. Funny, my eyes saw the word "patauguer". In those letters.
I will send you the corrected file today.

[Ealswythe]

Ch 2 corrected, "patauger" at 11:07

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_02_carroll_128kb.mp3

Duration 17:24

[Kitty]

Ch 2 corrected, "patauger" at 11:07
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_02_carroll_128kb.mp3
Duration 17:24

thanks, beautifully edited it's PL ok now

Sonia

[Ealswythe]

Thank you, Sonia!

[Ealswythe]

Here's Chapter 3 https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_03_carroll_128kb.mp3

Time 16:05

Thank you, Sonia!

[Kitty]

Here's Chapter 3 https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_03_carroll_128kb.mp3
Time 16:05

nicely done again, Linda I am glad though that the mouse did NOT tell her whole story, I thought she was a bit tedious to listen to LOL (not your fault, but the fault of the mouse) I liked this tail-shaped poem, a bit of a pity that one cannot really convey this in reading.

I have a few small pronunciation corrections to propose:

> at 1:30: "et comme celui-ci refusa tout net de le lui dire" - in the word "net" you need to pronounce the final 't' as well. /nett/

> at 9:16: "lui présentait solennellement le dé" - don't ask me why, but for some reason, this 'e' should be pronounced 'a' /so-la-nellement/ probably some linguistic mystery

the following two are suggestions to do "liaison" with the 's'. I would say, they are optional, as I don't think it's really wrong to say it your way, but maybe for French speakers it would sound more fluent if you did liaison:

> at 10:06: " car les gros oiseaux"

> at 14:59: "enfin sous un prétexte ou sous un autre"

Sonia

[Ealswythe]

Here's Chapter 3 https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_03_carroll_128kb.mp3
Time 16:05

nicely done again, Linda I am glad though that the mouse did NOT tell her whole story, I thought she was a bit tedious to listen to LOL (not your fault, but the fault of the mouse) I liked this tail-shaped poem, a bit of a pity that one cannot really convey this in reading.

I have a few small pronunciation corrections to propose:

> at 1:30: "et comme celui-ci refusa tout net de le lui dire" - in the word "net" you need to pronounce the final 't' as well. /nett/

> at 9:16: "lui présentait solennellement le dé" - don't ask me why, but for some reason, this 'e' should be pronounced 'a' /so-la-nellement/ probably some linguistic mystery

the following two are suggestions to do "liaison" with the 's'. I would say, they are optional, as I don't think it's really wrong to say it your way, but maybe for French speakers it would sound more fluent if you did liaison:

> at 10:06: " car les gros oiseaux"

> at 14:59: "enfin sous un prétexte ou sous un autre"

Sonia

OK, Sonia,
I'll make all these corrections. Those were points that I was debating about doing anyway: for some reason, I was thinking about pronouncing "tout nette" and making the liaison at "gros oiseaux" and "sous un prétexte, etc" but I opted for the opposite. Lol
"Solennellement" I did not know had to be with an "a" sound.
I will change all these things, and upload the new file today.
Thank you, Sonia!

[Ealswythe]

Ch 3 corrected https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_03_carroll_128kb.mp3

Thank you, Sonia!

[Kitty]

Ch 3 corrected https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_03_carroll_128kb.mp3
Thank you, Sonia!

excellented correct Linda thanks, everything PL ok now

Sonia

[Ealswythe]

Chapter 4 ready for PL https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_04_carroll_128kb.mp3

Duration 21:07
Thank you, Sonia!

[Kitty]

Super Linda, a new chapter is ready, and you know what ? No errors whatsoever on the first go: PL ok.

I never read the entire Alice book but this chapter is very famous Very nicely narrated, yet again

Sonia

[Ealswythe]

Thank you, Sonia! One of my favorite chapters is the next one... Conseils d'une Chenille. Can't wait to get started on that one!

[Ealswythe]

Chapitre 5 prêt à PL https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/aliceaupays_05_carroll_128kb.mp3

18:42
Thank you, Sonia!