I just saw that a new chapter is posted !!!
Ok, just had a listen. The cliffhanger at the end is intriguing...who is this strange man ?
Probably a shady character.
As for errors, you did really well this time, I only found one noticeable error, and the intro needs to be changed:
> at 0:01-0:24
: concerning the Intro
, we only need the “long” intro in the first chapter for a Solo, afterwards you can use the shortened intro. You see this in your first post:
For the second and all subsequent sections, you may optionally use the shortened form of this intro disclaimer:
"Chapter [number] of The House of Whispers by William Le Queux. This LibriVox recording is in the Public Domain."
If you wish, say:
"Recording by [your name], [city, your blog, podcast, web address]"
Only if applicable, say:
> at 5:37
: "that they set fire to the heather
" – I hear “healthier
” Could you maybe re-do this sentence ?
> the file name includes "the"houseofwhispers, can you re-upload without the article, please ? The file names should all be exactly the same, apart from the chapter number
The rest is fine. But the sound quality is more "off" than in the first chapter
I really don't know what's causing this, but we need to do something about it. Your reading is so nice, it's a pity the sound is going so "up and down".
You wouldn't have a raw recording of this chapter would you ? I mean one where your errors are already edited out, but it's not noise-cleaned or amplified yet. If you still have this file, could you please post it here, so I can have a listen how it sounds. Maybe we can salvage it.
And for Chapter 3, please only correct your errors and repeats and whatever you need to cut out, so that the entire text is ready to post in a fluent storyline. But don't noise clean and don't amplify. I want to check it first to hear how it sounds. Maybe the problem lies in the cleaning stage.