[COMPLETE] The House of Whispers by William Le Queux - tg

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 16th, 2017, 11:39 am

Kitty wrote:
adr6090 wrote:This is just so you are aware that I did take notes on the time it took for me to record & edit chapter 8.
It took 37 minutes to record with about 1 1/2 hours to edit.
ah yes, thanks for the info. Yes this reminds me of my longer chapters in my solo as well. I think if you use that time, it's enough to make the recording good.

Like Chapter 8, very nicely read again, and I found no significant errors I need to mention It can be marked PL ok. You're right, not much has been revealed, other that probably Gabrielle's father is a freemason or some other occult member Interesting enough.

Sonia

Sonia,

Thank you for the compliment.
I can not help but wonder just which chapter will give us more of an idea. I suppose we will found out eventually, eh?
April

Post by **Kitty** » August 16th, 2017, 11:44 am

adr6090 wrote:I can not help but wonder just which chapter will give us more of an idea. I suppose we will found out eventually, eh?

yes and I wonder when these promised whispers start

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 16th, 2017, 11:57 am

I think I know which chapter they will explain a bit more. I will not say though. WE will know more when that chapter happens.

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 17th, 2017, 12:38 pm

Hello Sonia,
Chapter 9 is now in the MW.
The mystery deepens....
April

Post by **Kitty** » August 17th, 2017, 1:28 pm

adr6090 wrote:Hello Sonia,
Chapter 9 is now in the MW.
The mystery deepens....
April

hurray another chapter

I loved these ominous messages, I was trying to make sense of them but couldn't LOL I hope they get explained later on in the story. Btw you didn't do too bad with the French sentences

The character I most love so far is Gabrielle's father, simply because I think you read his speeches so well. Each time the old man talks, you do it with either a slight laugh in your voice or very pensive, whatever is required. You do it with other characters as well, but I like it best with the old man. Maybe you have a soft spot for him too

The noise and volume still is absolutely perfect, we really have this sorted out for good now.

Unfortunately I found a small textual error to correct this time:

> at 7:30: "No, dear," he urged. "Don't try to understand, for you can never do that. - you forgot "don't" which doesn't make sense in the way the sentence is phrased. Could you re-record this entire sentence, clean and amplify and then paste it into the old recording ? By now you are getting good at editing errors, so I guess this will not present too much trouble.

Thanks, it was very entertaining !

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 17th, 2017, 2:39 pm

Hello again Sonia,
I just finished the chapter 9 edit & posted the new version in the mw.
April

Post by **Kitty** » August 17th, 2017, 2:49 pm

adr6090 wrote:Hello again Sonia,
I just finished the chapter 9 edit & posted the new version in the mw.
April

ah that was fast ! And PERFECTLY edited again.

wouldn't hear a difference in sound. Chapter 9 PL ok now. Great

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 17th, 2017, 2:52 pm

I just did the solo word. I was concerned that the French was massacred by me. Not so much, eh?

Post by **Kitty** » August 17th, 2017, 3:06 pm

adr6090 wrote:I just did the solo word.

wow only one word !!! that was really well done

I was concerned that the French was massacred by me. Not so much, eh?

weeeelll, honestly...a bit yes, but not too much. All in all it was comprehensible, otherwise I would have told you.

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 18th, 2017, 10:20 am

Thanx Sonia

April

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 18th, 2017, 2:34 pm

Sonia,
Chapter 10 is now in the mw. The father was not active in this chapter.

Enough to keep a person captivated though....
April

Post by **Kitty** » August 19th, 2017, 5:14 am

adr6090 wrote:Sonia,
Chapter 10 is now in the mw. The father was not active in this chapter.
Enough to keep a person captivated though....
April

what a cliffhanger again !!!! And I saw the promising title of the next chapter...seems the Whispers will make an appearance at last

Well read yet again, April and I think I need not repeat the sound and volume is good yet again, because I think we really worked this problem out and you won't have any trouble with that anymore.

However I'd like to point out three places where you could make a small correction:

> at 3:28 - "Why, dearest!" he exclaimed, taking her hand and bending till he pressed it to his lips," - you forgot the underlined part of the sentence, could you insert this please, since it makes the sentence more complete ?

> at 4:15-4:16 - I think I hear a doorbell ringing in the pause,

can you maybe cut a silence from another part of the recording, and paste it over this one ?

> at 11:07 - "in the coverts remote from the house" - you say "converts" here

the rest totally fine !

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 21st, 2017, 1:52 pm

Sonia,
chapter 10 with your edit suggestions is now in the mw.

Post by **Kitty** » August 21st, 2017, 3:13 pm

adr6090 wrote:Sonia,
chapter 10 with your edit suggestions is now in the mw.

thanks April, perfectly edited again

PL ok now

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 21st, 2017, 3:16 pm

Kitty wrote:
adr6090 wrote:Sonia,
chapter 10 with your edit suggestions is now in the mw.
thanks April, perfectly edited again

PL ok now

Sonia

Thank you. I have recorded chapter 11 though I probably will not edit and post until tomorrow. Prepare yourself for more mystery....